New Trunks Model!!

[Cruzharo]

The 1st stuff was absolutly ...uhm not good.

But the improvement is so much better. GJ so far keep it up

 

[PiXel]

improvment is better.... now just do it ^^ ....after time ull get better

 

[DBXMe2]

dont worry about it I'm a patron of milksape... now I use Maya, but neway...

crit$= in the crotch area.... make it so it doesnt cave in.... give him room for his nuts... arms need more polies for detail and form purposes.... besides that good stuff lol good butt

 

[PiXel]

arnt the leg to long? and his body to short?
Do he have a A$s?

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

I don't think he has a proper As$ but ill fix that later. Heres a small rendered update with the wirefram overlay so you can see the polyflow. Give critz!

And by the way i'm doing almighty gir's tut so ill have new arms for it soon!

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Sorry for the double post but here in another update , new arms and pecs!! give critz!!

 

[MajinZGohan]

you shouldn't have tried to define the biceps, but now that you did, either get rid of em, or make em higher up.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Why shouldn't i define the biceps? and part of defining them was smoothing groups, here is an update with some folds in the trousers.

 

[Mr. Phonso]

try to less define the fold and make it not look like a V

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

update !! I added the folds and made them less v shapped, looks awesome !!

Give critz!!

 

[Eisberg]

im no expert but it looks a bit choppy/metal like...to defined i guess i should say...any way u can smooth it out?

 

[Mr. Phonso]

oh ya now that looks a lot better, make his pants on side view less fat

 

[YaM]

hmm

Take a look at the placement of his bicep. Do you really think he can bend his elbow with a muscle at that point?

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

So what do u think i should do with them? move them up or get rid of them, im not sure this is my third model

heres a flatshaded update,give critz plz

 

[TeKNiK]

Looks like he has a broken leg. Might wanna fix that. His legs also seem way long and a lil skinny from the side.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

hmm...i get told to less widen the legs then widen them again gues i do 2 much Heres an update, i fixed the bicep placements and adjusted the folds so they dont look like trunks has a broken leg. The funny thing is that it doesn't look like he has a broken leg when he isn't rendered..must b the lighting effects. anyway enough talking heres the update now give critz!!

 

[Mr. Phonso]

ok the its now pretty much fine, just shape the ass! (on side and back view)

 

[Damaera]

The ass and the arms are messed up.

 

[Maistro]

I dunno he seems to chubby to be a Z-warrior

 

[PiXel]

wth is wrong with the shoes??????
theyre to back! otherwise... shape teh a§$ and the under part of the shoulders got a bad polyflow!