My First Model With Max

[Damaera]

Stop posting pictures of the unfinished head It scares me -_-

The boot part is too pointy ;o-<

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Ok thanks everybody for the critz, i followed movento's drawover as much as possible but the side view made him look a tad fat and i understood wat u mean by the blue bits and the orange bits i removed his face and hair so you can sleep tonight dream killa also made his waist wider and added wristbands, heres a wire render for you..

 

[Mr. Phonso]

why do the wristbands look like they are sucked in, arent they suppoded to be thicker than the arm as a pose to being thiner? on the angled view for the pants shirk some of the bottom folds. pants from side veiw needs knees instead of just a couple polygons runing down his pants, and the bottom of the ass shouldnt suck in so much, thats it for now, good job

 

[Dewil]

I think you should smothe it

 

[jp]

I think you should smothe it

-_- it is... but he just shows a flatshaded version

You really are improving! :yes: , might even become a very good model to play with.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

thanks ds, heres an update! slowly come the details!!

fixed up ass, arms, wristbands, folds, added folds, polyflow tweaks and some other stuff i can't remember

 

[Almighty_Gir]

his anles are fatter than his ass

 

[Fatality]

dont model in folds >_<

 

[movento]

looks ok.I suggest you put some more shape in his arms(from the front view)

 

[Sam Fisher]

that is some pretty cool stuff, all i can do in max is made a ball with spikes coming out :laff:

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

OMG he went SSJ!!!

Messing round with renders, ill post some wires later

 

[Damaera]

Nightmares >_>

I don't like the fold's on the body ;o

/me Open's up photoshop and cut's goku's head off o/

 

[movento]

looks cool man,just put mare shape in your arm and legs,the look to much like cylinders

 

[imported_EVIL_GOKU]

yeah nice model...only 1 crit his eyes I mean I saw yar normal Goku and from a side u would say that he has Spidermans eyes...ohh yeah and change that SSJ hair

 

[Fatality]

dont model in folds >_< it makes the model harder to skin the folds in.

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

gaa im gonna finish his head soon so you can sleep again im working on the basic body structure first, getting the head, neck and hair, everything basic into goku, then i will start defining arms and trousers more etc, i made a whole new face if you didnt notice, heres a wire render 4 you

(im going to fix the polyflow on the face, i rekon its rather bad atm)
, and @ furr, i want to keep the folds even though it adds to making it harder to skin but i'll find a way to manage

heres a full body render, c&c now

 

[Damaera]

Same Crits, If you did'nt read them,

NIGHTMARES!! (I hope you know what's causing them, the hair ;X)

And don't model in fold's.

 

[Fatality]

and you may want to work on the poly structure on the hair...its terrifiing XD

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

heh hers a perspective angle,

arms look weird *goes to fix*

furr, what do you mean by polystructure? you mean how they are not connected because i am currently doing that and i am going to make a few changes, or is it polyflow you're talking about im confused sry :/

 

[Mr. Phonso]

on the last pic the back of his knees look real weird, try moving some vertices back a bit

and on the hair fix the back 3 spikes, they all look alike