Inspired By Tim

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Well i liked tim his work...so i have some of mine..
and a little of his style...
i hope he likes it becouse if he dont i will remove it..
bud um...my art isnt that sick as his...lol..
well it took me a long time to make bud here it is
hope you guys like it

After The Long Way In Hell...
It Becomes Feeling Well...
its Very still...And The Only Thing You Feel Is That Youre ill...
Bud After Years oF This Pain i Become Insane...
I turned To The Good Side...
Bud What Is Good?
And What Is Wrong?
Am I Really Dead?
Am I Really Alive?

I Think I Die...
Becouse I Always Lie
Bud,
If This Is Really How It Ends...
Then There Was Never A Defence...


The Eternal Asking Angel oF Pain


 
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Hey thats pretty cool, and i dont think tim would care all that much. A few things though...

-Maybe somewhere put some text i dunno its not necessary and some would disagree but maybe a little something in the corner like a title.

-And i realize that your not from the U.S and im assuming your original language is not english, correct? Well maybe its just me and these kind of things bug me, but i think that when your writing something with meaning (ex: poem, essay etc.) or when your adding a poem to an image (ex: your blood bag art thing) then try to make sure that all the grammar is correct. I know what you mean when you say bud but its supposed to be but now im not trying to pick at you but thats just what im thinkin...errr yea.

Anyway its a rather nice piece, but shouldnt this be in the Artwork section since its not a sig. Right?
 
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text On The Pic...i dunno...maybe if more people think i must do that..

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sorry about me language...yeah somethimes it really sucks..(always)
I'm really sorry about it...bud it inprove every day... :smile:
till then...i think i cant really help it..
bud i would try

3 sorry it is in this section..i'm used to put it here becouse i always make sigs..
hahhaa..well the could replace it if they want.. :smile:

ThnQ 4 crits and comments :smile:
Greetz Niracle...
 
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well, thats kinda weird with a skeleton with wings buuut, is this for a sig or something because its in the sig section.
 

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