I challenge Deverz

[grOOvy]

Correct grammatization, and the ability to grab and maintain the reader's interest always merits higher points as compared to continuous fighting with unnessary details thrown in between.

You do have the ability to express yourself in your 'own way', but you need to practice writing in proper english and writing in a way that you keep the reader interested throughout your post. Yea, I'm talking about Kaigeta, who has lost this final round due to the reasons mentioned above. Deverz is the winner of this round and war. Good try by Kaigeta, you have quite a vivid imagination. You would do much better if you could capture the same vividness and project it in your stories.

Kaigeta will now award reputation points to Deverz, and Deverz will pwn Kaigeta - oper style. This thread is now open to public comments, since the match is over.

 

[Naruto Kun]

grOOvy, im ashamed in u, for a judge u should know Deverz still has to do his fatality on me, lol

 

[Optimus Prime]

grOOvy, im ashamed in u, for a judge u should know Deverz still has to do his fatality on me, lol

How could dev have done his fatality if he didn't even know he'd won yet

 

[Deverz]

I can do it now though.

Kaigeta's eyes filled with fear. He knew he had lost, he knew he was about to die. He tried to get up, to run away but Deverz held him down. He motioned to the two figures. Kaigeta swore he heard them chuckle as they moved closer. They sounded excited to take him. They moved to either side and Kaigeta gave up his stuggle, decided to take death as it came. Deverz moved out the way and what was gonig to happen with pleasure. Both figures reached out at the same time and touched Kaigeta, he let a scream of horror and pain then went limp. The world returned to normal in the IRC channel where Kaigeta had died you could see Kaigeta has Quit (G-lined From Life.). Deverz walked away from his PC pleased with himself.