Gotenks Wip

[MajinZGohan]

Here's the gotenks I've been working on for the past 2 days. I tried modelling the wrinkles, but erm it turned out .... interesting. Note that this probably isn't going to be the skin used.

Hand Coming Soon....lol
<img src="http://www.esf-ta.com/phpBB2/album_pic.php?pic_id=23&sid=554583a14adec1d5d4b148430cffcc3b">

 

[Eon]

rofl he looks...super chibi...like chibi chibi..that's my only crit.

 

[MajinZGohan]

that was one fast reply, erm is it the hand that makes him look realy really chibi?

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

LEGO MAN!! naw its just teh model alltogether. he has the porportions of an 8 year old with oversized clothes

 

[TwisteR]

try giving him hands instead of knobs, and make him taller. yea just looks really chibi, like Magus said.

 

[King_Nak]

his head looks really weird and the abbs on him arent right and make him taller like said before

 

[MajinZGohan]

okay how's that?
<img src="http://www.esf-ta.com/phpBB2/album_pic.php?pic_id=24&sid=92819e0eab513d25faf0aaeee7d06b51>

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i give thumbs up on teh front. just fix the sides =D

 

[guest]

yes, it wshouldnt all be the same size on the side, try making the but just above the legs a lil tighter mayB, move the legs around a bit, etc.

*edit* looking at it again, that actualy only goes 4 the body, the legs look fine. also, u might want 2 make his chest a bit bigger on front veiw, not sure tho...

 

[Hobomaster]

um...... make the abs like ( instead of | and the top rounded instead of flat

 

[Drunken Trunks]

the pants and legs are deformed..
one is bigger than the other ><
fix it plz
it makes seem retarded
and the pants seem bigger in front view and a lot smaller in the side views
and the arms look a bit chubby

 

[Bolteh2]

upperbody, feet and hands are too small
the head and chest area like physicly disabled, hes all square and stuff
the hair is... weird.. too pointy
the belt is too fat and doesnt look right
weird anatomy overall, and blurry/dirty looking skin

but nice job, youre obviously learning, keep it up, look at more references

 

[MajinZGohan]

wow thanks everyone , I'll try make the feet bigger, and I'll see what I can do about the hair, and head, and chest.
<img src="http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/gotenksallangles3.jpg">

 

[Enix]

nice, but.....

1. belt looks like poo poo
2. Face is flat
3. from the side view he looks like he was made outta a cylinder
4. colors ar too dim
5. and finally the expresion is wierd

but i must say its very nice, im new to full body modeling but i know how to crit.

 

[Johnny]

wow finaly a good gotenks model. Good job!

 

[MajinZGohan]

okay, how's that? I removed the skin because the skin before isn't going to be used.
<img src="http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/gotenksallangle4.jpg">

 

[TwisteR]

make is waits bigger, hes a bit too skinny.
http://www.dbgtn.com/images/cels/gotenks/gotenks59.jpg

 

[The_Real_Legend]

make is waits bigger, hes a bit too skinny.
http://www.dbgtn.com/images/cels/gotenks/gotenks59.jpg

from the side he isn't :shocked:

 

[MajinZGohan]

okay how's that?

I also remodelled the nose too.

<img src="http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/gotenksallangles5.jpg">

 

[ssj 4 gogetenks]

look at the feet in this pic http://www.dbgtn.com/images/cels/gotenks/gotenks45.jpg u need to make ur feet longer but skinnier. make the belt smaller and not so thick. but good job on the rest.