Goten WIP

[Goten-son]

heres a drawover i did to show you whats wrong...

<img src="http://jonku.com/bsg/drawover1.gif">

 

[Prefalen Raziel]

oi wheres his ears oi and look hes got an afro it looks goofy oi and wot when hes fighting hes gonna look at the sky crosseyed and hes gona go hey bo looking at sky running around bahah make him looking normal and grow him some ears and shorten hair

 

[CS-LAND]

The face is soooo bad. But the rest is okay.

 

[Super Veggeto]

i hope you looked at the new face...

 

[Super Veggeto]

i think im done with this model...
i reached my limites in this one...
here is pic on the final model/skin...

maby it's not the best but for me it is so..
you can still give some crits if you want...maby i'll use them

hope you like the final results and i'm really hoping for some good crits...

 

[Super Veggeto]

i really need to know what do you think about this model?

 

[Darkone]

you realy shouldnt double post .. i think its fine it does have goten s face a few crytz but its fine!!!

 

[TwisteR]

i think his jaw is too big. it makes his face look fatter than it should be. maybe thin that up a little.

 

[Suh Dude]

Good Job Super Veggeto, Whats your msn?

 

[AuroraFlash]

hmm ... no .. goten is more happy ... this face ... i mean the eyes ... he is looking as if he were a different character... he has to look like the chibi goku which was made by godgundam or... i don't know his exact name ... but you know what i mean ... it's a very nice model and also a nice face, but his view... it gives a wrong impression ...

 

[MajinZGohan]

haha lol! he has a monkey face! scale is face so it's more triangle

 

[Enix]

nice but face does need to be scaled.make the cheecks smaller.good job though like the skin. 9.50/10

 

[Super Veggeto]

hmm ... no .. goten is more happy ... this face ... i mean the eyes ... he is looking as if he were a different character... he has to look like the chibi goku which was made by godgundam or... i don't know his exact name ... but you know what i mean ... it's a very nice model and also a nice face, but his view... it gives a wrong impression ...

i made his imression like that in the first place i dont want him to be happy or calm...
think about it, he is going to fight..
and i've seen some episodes with an impressions like that on goten before...
anyway, im gonna fix the cheeks and i think im done...
though if you still have some crits i'll be happy to see them...

 

[davke15]

i have 2 things to say

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[AuroraFlash]

yes. uhm ... have i mentioned that you could make more than one face skin ... the same way godgundam and kama did

 

[Prefalen Raziel]

yeah nice super vegetto thats awesome the ears and everything is just fine keep up good work

 

[PiXel]

1.Don't make it round if u look of the other picture dritik there are a goten picture!!!
2.Why he got so small eyebrown??
3.Try to fix the error's wich are there!!!(i mean all not the one)
4.It look's like goten didn't good a T-shirt or something make it more full
5. nice skin nice legs nice work^^
}EDIT{

u can look at the picture vor orient thing's (i draw it ^^)

 

[AuroraFlash]

this should be the ssj face ...

this is goten's normal expression

this is goten making a kamehamehaa... this move should look exactly like that... not like default esf ... pay attention to the hands ...

when goten flies fast (like melee attack) , his hair moves like that...
so you should add this hair animation

and this - as you know - is gotens most powerful form ... fused with trunks
to gotenks super-saiyan level 3

 

[Super Veggeto]

yea emmm maby i'll make a few more faces like kama did...could be nice ^ ^..
german boy...thanks for the crits i'll use them...
auroraflash i cant see the pics..

 

[AuroraFlash]

you can't ? maybe they blocked it ... or it's your firewall ... anything like that ? there should still be a link to the pictures ... can anyone else in here see the pictures ? i do ...