Goten WIP

[Johnveejones]

Cool, but GOTEN has a long shirt, and its black. fix it, and it will be more excelent than that seems to be!

 

[Johnveejones]

oh sorry it isnt my fault

 

[Johnveejones]

OBS: I didn't saw the final work before... good job!

 

[Sonic the Vampire]

John let's keep it down to one post at a time. If you have something you want to add to a preexisting post click the edit button on it instead of clicking post reply again.

the model looks very good m8, and Sonic are u a Mod? If not, dont act like one, and llet the Mods handle it....if ur not a Mod i mean....
:laff:

Yes, I am a mod. I've been around for a while, I just don't make it too obvious in my signature. That little "ESForces Secret Police" tag is all you get to decipher it from. One way to tell who is a mod and who is not is to go back to the main modeling forum page and scroll to the bottom where the moderators are listed.

 

[Prefalen Raziel]

sorry kama it was just a line i still think use are better but i like his skin its awesome

 

[Super Veggeto]

the under shirt should be like that...dark blue not black...
the belt should be black...
trust me this is the right colors...if you want me to show you some refs...

and i doubt im better then kama or slim...i think that if they want they can be better then me any day...

anyway kama i need your help...can you help me with the face again please?
with the same style that you used on slims...
and if you have time you can reskinmap it...
i'll talk to you on msn...

 

[zeldalink]

Cool, but GOTEN has a long shirt, and its black. fix it, and it will be more excelent than that seems to be!

dude i think u are color blind or your tv / computer is to satcherated

 

[Marauder]

looks good meanwhile, i like the eyes...
umm...the rinkles on the legs..
it looks wierd, should be started abit higher..

 

[Super Veggeto]

i finished my skin!
i had alot of problems with the face and i know it's not the best...
hope you like it cuz i've worked hard on it...

 

[Suh Dude]

maybe i should make you teach me how to skin because taht right there is realism a bit

 

[SA_Gohan]

The skin is pretty good, but IMHO the proportions are off in the chest and legs. The shoulders are way to wide for Goten, and his pants should be much baggier and a little longer.

http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/getpicture.php?id=573098

 

[Mr Smo]

nice folds on the legs

 

[Enix]

i like it all exept for the head the hair is nice but its flooding the face. and the shape of the head is kinda wierd shaped. but all and all 9/10

 

[Super Veggeto]

slim hehe i really doubt i need to teach you how to skin...
SA gohan you right about the shoulders but the pants are ok it's just looks small because of the position...
and neoboy448...what do you mean flooding the face?

 

[Super Veggeto]

update:

i redid the lower gi's since they'ev looked kinda weird...
redid the chest, cleaner and smoother skin...
and changed the face and the eyes..
i think that looks alot better...
now, if theres somthing wrong with the skin just tell me and ill fix it up...

 

[sephiroth_nightmare]

that looks amazing dude good job, move his eyes down slightly because he look like he is bored lol.
the model is very well done. its hard to crit becaue its a very well done model. good job

 

[Super Veggeto]

update
redid the face...
please give some crits...

 

[dynamic`]

the eyes look tilted a little too much and the eye brow should be thicker

 

[Super Veggeto]

fixed...look above

 

[dynamic`]

yea the eye brows look better but i still think that the eyes are tilted too much
also you should make a more noticable shading under the nose, its kinda hard too see right now