Goten WIP

[Goten-son]

looking pretty good, ignore my sloppy remark lol i was half asleep when viewing this thread

 

[Nuttzy]

lest see some flats, theres something about the legs that catches my attention,

the torso is alright i suppose, the skin could fixt some of it, but the part where the orange suit hangs over the blue shir6 is too sharp, round it out

 

[Super Veggeto]

flat shaded as requsted...
i'll be workin on the hands soon ,just need to check some tuts first..

 

[dark slayer]

u could turn some edges on the face to give him a better look but the rest is good .And for the hair there isn´t a tut but look at some goku models ( esf,smo´s. etc.)and try to understand their way of building hair
then try do build it on ur own.The hair in my ava is my first hair(i was a noob modler at that time :talk: ) and even if ur a new to modeling it isn´t difficult to make it after some time .ohh jeah and look at some ref pics ^^

 

[Element4q2]

His neck looks a little on the thin side, but i guess thats a quick fix when the hair is done. Also try maybe making the area where the neck meets the shoulder a little less sudden (i.e. rounded) if you know what i mean.

 

[Super Veggeto]

hands!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK...fixed the neck a lil like element said...hands...nothing more.
but now the hair...
i'll try to make the hair, it may take some time but im sure i'll figure somthing out...

more crits?

 

[Super Veggeto]

sorry for the duble post but i just got esf goku's hair to match the face..
do you like it?

what do you think should i keep it that way?

EDIT:very big problem i dont know how to assign skeleton and all this ****..
can someone help me with that...?

and i need someone to skinmap\skin it...
if sombody that can do one of this things that would be great.
i think i'll have a shot at the skin as well...

 

[davke15]

hmmm i think you should size down the hair its to big
all the other stuff is :yes: :yes:
keep it up

 

[Super Veggeto]

super saiyan!!!

i made the normal hair smaller..
now the only thing left is to skin and assign skeleton..
who's up for the chalenge???

 

[ssjgoten660]

looks great!
finally someone's making a goten model

 

[Kama]

Before that..

-Lower crotch
-Thicken neck, looks scary from side

Good job after that.

 

[Super Veggeto]

about the crotch.. i think it better off this way cuz i tried lower it down and it looked really weird...
about the neck, yea i missed it before and it's fixed now.

thanks for the crits....any other crits...?
cuz if not its ready for the skinning and all..

 

[Element4q2]

Hmm, lets see - the position of the shoulder/arm/sleeve might cause some trouble in the assignment process. Anyway i could give the assigning a shot and maybe skin it depending on my "free-time" status.

 

[UsSj BrOlLy]

offtopic: there allready is a good goten model for youre information ssjgoten look at www.hl2files.com

Ontopic:youre progression is going great good job

 

[Super Veggeto]

thanks...and i know there is another goten model but his face looks weird and his hand is totaly ****ed up...

 

[ssjgoten660]

i looked and i saw none

 

[TwisteR]

god gundam made one a long time ago, last time i seen it was on RS, but as most of you know the site isnt up anymore.

 

[B|inX]

looks great both ssj and normal , just one thing though, gotens belt is blue, lie his under shirt. other then that its geat

 

[Super Veggeto]

no...
trust me its black.

and right now im skinning it my self...looks ok to me actualy but only you can tell me what do you think...
ssooooo....updates soon!

 

[Dask]

pls keep us posted on pics vegetto, i love goten and will probably get this model if its good