Goten Wip

[Styer101]

well like the name says its a goten wip and i am some what of a newb so constructive crits please.

http://styer101.tripod.com/

 

[Dope-Man]

it looks pretty good but it looks like he has square shaped nipples

 

[dynamic`]

it looks pretty good but it looks like he has square shaped nipples

what the hell are you talking about?
all he has done is the shirt thing, how can you say it has square nipples?

well i think it looks ok but not much can be said yet. finish more of it so we can actually crit it

 

[Styer101]

rgr that i am trying to work on the back right now so i can finish the torso but i can't remember if in the back does the blue shirt get covered up by the yellow-orange shirt or wat?

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i acnt see teh image

 

[Just-a-guy]

I can, but there's not much to crit yet...:S

 

[Styer101]

ok well sence i didnt' get any reply on how the back looks i will try a draw over of my back

so remember this is the back not the front i cant get any pics of gotens back so don't tell me it goes down further unless it actualy does

http://styer101.tripod.com/

 

[DragonDude]

I don't see anything wrong with it yet, but there isn't much, that could be a model of just about anyone at this point.
Looking good so far, just keep it up.

 

[Chosen Saiyan]

looks good till now

 

[Styer101]

ok well i think i am finished with the torso but if you have any crits tell me and i will change them.
I did the back from complete memory so don't yell at me that it is wrong cause it might be.

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs_back.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs_side.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss_back.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss_side.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/head_fs.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/head_ss.jpg

copy and paste

and please give crits

 

[Styer101]

please give me crits... im only a noober

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

yeah try giving creditz to esf for the hair... and i know u didnt make that body ive seen it somewhere before

 

[Styer101]

ok well i will give credit to smo for the hair but the body is completley mine and thats all i have to say to that comment ice.

On the other hand i need crits so i can fix stuff but i am not getting any so if you want it you gonna have to tell me what needs to be fixed

edit- i just tried to pm smo but his pm box is full or he has choosen not to so i can't ask him for permision.

 

[Just-a-guy]

head's too big
scale the y-axis a bit

 

[Styer101]

well i merged the body and head so take a look

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs_back.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_fs_side.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss_back.jpg

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/goten_body_ss_side.jpg


edit- ok im working on the legs and i have got them attached with no holes and i take one look at it and laugh and think to myself... hey its gangster goten :laff:

take a look

http://m1p3s.free-host.com/pics/gangset_goten.jpg

 

[Cruzharo]

Damh? Is that goten??well the legs are too big the hed is too small and ya a few more things....

But gr8 keep it up and yull improve...

 

[Styer101]

how are you legs to big like on the x-axis or y-axis?

 

[Chosen Saiyan]

the links doesnt work :S

 

[Styer101]

ok yea i think something is wrong with freehost so i will try and load them on my other site

edit- i guess i exceded the bandwith limit or something but i have an update for yall. check it out.

 

[SteveoDBGT]

i acnt see the pictures. They load from the bottem up of each picture and stop when the feet are showing.