Goku WIP

[MajinZGohan]

okay, meet my first model that I used a reference that I made( actually that I gathered and combined) The middle is not a skin, I was just playing with my tablet. Focus on the right side one for the front. Crits please?
By the way, my references didn't exactly match up very good, so at some parts I chose to go with my front ref, and sometimes I went with my side. Pants=front belt= in between body = both

erm should I post my reference?
<img src="http://majin.raged.us/showed.jpg">

 

[dbrulz72]

Nice model.

 

[Prefalen Raziel]

very very nice goku m8 keep up gj bo

 

[MajinZGohan]

so sorry, forgot to add that that entirely isn't a skin, that's not going to be the faces skin because 3ds max is kinda weird on skin mapping thing, so I'll be creating a skin map on ms3d and then I'll be reskinning. I'll post without the place holder skin

 

[Denz]

here u go its the least I can do

 

[MajinZGohan]

thanks dendza, but I think I'm gonna try and follow my refs as close as possible
here he is crits please.

Ref on bottum
<img src="http://majin.raged.us/gokuwithout skin.jpg">
<img src="http://majin.raged.us/gokutotalref.jpg">

 

[Denz]

Maybe this will help for the front body structure:

and this for back view (if u ever use back view)

I know its SSJ but it will help just make body like in the pics and make
your own hair (from your ref) and there u have it.
Keep it up.

 

[MajinZGohan]

i used that, I placed that body and traced it. however, for that back ref, there is a normal goku on dbgtn.com so I'm using that for ref on skinning the back.

Okay, I'm probably gonna leave you all hanging from here till weekends because I'm trying out for track, and I'm not gonna have much time to model other then the weekends. Wish me luck I'm going out for hurdles or 400 relays.

 

[Chubbs]

Look's good, just his eye's...make his face more -anime like- then it will be on the right track. Keep up the good work, and good luck with track.

 

[MajinZGohan]

woot, an update. My computer fried, but that didn't stop me from working. Luckily, i backed up all my stuff before my comp fried, so I'm working on my mom's crappy comp for now. Anyways, I'm having trouble with the boots... I can't get it to look correct, any ideas?

<img src="http://majin.raged.us/gokuneckcomplete.jpg">

 

[dynamic`]

i can see some areas it could have some edits but so far its ok

 

[Vegeta]

What the hell did you do to his fricking legs? Oh my god, he's crippled.

 

[MajinZGohan]

AAAAHHHHHHH!!! I KEEP SCREWING UP ON THE HAIR AND ARMS!!!!!!!

didn't want to post the hair because it was too screwy
okay, I hope i fixed the legs

<img src="http://majin.raged.us/gokuwitharms.jpg">

 

[CM]

you made it worse.

 

[CrackerJack]

Yeah, SC is right. Its kinda.. bad.. Pretty terible (arms+Legs+Chest+Face). Its, well, i dont think anything including a skin can fix it.

 

[MajinZGohan]

doh!!!! I better not post the hair then..... lol. Aww man, I thought the face looked pretty good.

 

[dynamic`]

i dont really think its that bad..... just a little wide but like i said before i can see some ares that i could change and make it better

 

[MajinZGohan]

It's been a long time since I updated, anyways update:
<img src="http://www.esf-ta.com/gokuwip.jpg">

 

[Nuttzy]

ill be blunt, you could use an honest crit for once,

the only thing on the model that remotely resembles goku is the color,

the arms look like sausages with an inflated rubber gloves on the end, he has no wrists, and no muscles skinned or modelled on,

the pants just look bad, the edge on the side is way too straight, model his pants shaped properly with rounded off edges, they look very stiff the way you have them,

i can tell by looking at the shadows how you built the toso, add a row of polys between the edge of the blue part of his shirt and the shoulders it dips in right there and looks bad,

the hair is alright, but i could see someone also making a tina turner model out of it just as easy as a goku, thin it down a little bit,

now the proportions look as if your trying to make a midget goku, you made him too fat in certain areas and it makes him look short,


fix all that, (and get a better skin) and it will be decent i suppose, i dont expect you to save the model myself, but you might surprise me,

(for all the noobs here, before you go on a crybabay tantrum im not flaming his model, im criticising it which is what this forum is for)

 

[The_Forgotten]

Looks good MGohan, but whats that point on his legs?