Gohan Model WIP

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Ok well this is my first time posting here. I started working on Gohan this morning and this is what i have so far. I was hoping i could get some crits and advice and tips for the model cause i am taking this model seriously and wanna have a good start on the model. It took me a while to get the head the way i want it but i am later going to take some of the poly count out of it. What took me the most was the hair which as it is right now doesn't satisfy me that much. Well here it is:

[img=http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6310/gohanhd7.jpg]

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http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6310/gohanhd7.jpg

and it looks like a good start to me, better than mine but anyway the hair looks cool the face bothers me a lil, lets see make the face a bit shorter and thiner and thats all i see wrong...

 

[markg85]

the spike in the har needs some more work for the rest as far as i can see it it looks good

 

[Ryeko]

The face looks a little odd, but it looks good.

 

[Ryokeen]

Good start, just move the big spikes on his hair a bit forward.

 

[SS_gohan44]

wow for a first model post i think it rocks, i wish i was that good at modeling (i suck at it lol but i still go at it i just need good ref pictures and a tutorial for milkshape) but anywho it's a good start and i cant wait to see more of it
Good job and Good night

 

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well actually this model is going to be for BtL Ravendust said for crits and tips this is the best place to post my work for help and etc...and right now...i am busy working for another game not mod called Megaman Arena...we are working on a release soon and if you know that game...heres a little screen of a hoaver board i made and uvmaped and skinned today...kills will put it ingame tomorrow:

well gotta go...hope i can finish this gohan soon