Gogeta WIP

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So then from me its no crits .... cuz i think its perfect now whit last updates... i think i should be ready for realise
 
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Hey I havent posted here in a while but I still check the forums once in a while. There were a few things bugging me with the texture I had to comment on. Hope you dont mind.

1. The hair needs some more lights and darks. SSJ4 Gogeta I think looks evil. Yours just looks a tad to bright to me.

2. Also with his pecs. On alot of the screenshots it looks like his pecs busted thru that fur. I think the creases need to be there. Gives it a better appearance.

3. Just a little more dark around the eyes.

Here is my ****ty drawover. :)

I totally agree with metro on 2. and 3. ... you should really try that out dude :D
But even without those edits, it looks really great by now :D
Usually I hate ssj4 but this makes me actually want to play as it :)
 
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i think that the abs/chest thingy is wrong it should look like this and if u can try to make the hair texture more like this

yes?
 
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i think that the abs/chest thingy is wrong it should look like this and if u can try to make the hair texture more like this

yes?
i think that the fur texture is fine the way it is now.:]
 
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I ended up fixing the stuff now, so here it is:



-Fixed the furr around the abs
-Removed the line on the forehead
-Added creases on the chest
-Made the black lines around the eyes thicker
 
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Eh my bad SV. im stupid when it comes to crits :( Just trying to help but im worthless for some things.
 
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You're not worthless heh, things might look different from certain views.
I'm sure you can crit when you see something wrong ;)


Anyways, Eclipse and I officialy decided this project is done ;3
Currently I'm adding the bones and getting it ready for animating, and...well, you'll see soon I guess ^_^

Also going to play around with poses and come up with a cool wallpaper for both SSJ and SSJ4 Gogeta :smile:
 
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Probably not, there are a lot of animations that need to edited and things changed, plus SV might have other things that need to be worked on, you never know. But think of it this way, it's coming sooner then later :D.
 
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I ended up fixing the stuff now, so here it is:



-Fixed the furr around the abs
-Removed the line on the forehead
-Added creases on the chest
-Made the black lines around the eyes thicker
now he looks really good:D
 
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Love the looks. I think this is one of those models that will give you a Boner =D.
 
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This is one of those models that you will keep dying when you're playing him because you won't be concentrating on the fight, but instead oogling at he eye candy of the model.
 
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very good i cant wait for the realease
 
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that gogeta is the best one that was ever made , i love it! but theres a few things that need to be in line

and the fringe needs to be a bit biger and one of the fridge haires heed to cover the ear, like in the pic :D ,...but its stil is the best , i'd call it finished and redy for release ;) great job you
 
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agreed! the best gogeta model and skin i've ever seen. i hope it comes out reaal soon.
 
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Looking good SV.

Quick skin crit for the sake of accuracy: You might want to add some lines to show striations on the sides of the shoulders. (The 3 lines that define the front/side/rear deltoids visible on final shines' pic)
 

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