I think ill explain my other Character Kyren(I noticed one of your characters has a similar name, beleive me i never knew about that, but sorry, my guys name stays). He might be more Desireable.
Hes Half Saiya-jin, but also half Fera-jin. An off-shoot race. They are better trained in the mind then the body, sorta like Kaioshin, but much higher magnitude. If Kyren trained for long enough, within 10 years he could crush a star with his mind. Unfortunatly he would go insane from the power and erase his own mind. He is the ultimate warrior, A master of the Martial arts(Ki), and the mental Arts(Psi). Most trueblooded Fera-jin warriors are total masters of the mind, trading some durability for mental power. An Untransformed Vegeta could taer one apart, if he could get close. Kyren is not quite as poweful in themind has his Father, but makes upo for it in his Amazing Saiya-jin speed and power. His already incredible Speed is augmented by his Powerful and alert senses. He may not pack as much of a punch as Vegeta or Goku, but hell get more in. Fera-Jin have tails at birth, but they cannot transform. Infact, Kyren still has his.
He has a set of transforms as well.
Normal: He has White hair, Black eyes.
Normal SSJ(From his obvious Heritage)
PSSJ(Psionic Super Saiya-jin):Hair turns Light Sky blue, pupils disappear, and the eyes also start glowing.
PSSJ2: Like SSJ3, were he becomes very muscular and Fast, as well as the lengthy hair, but the comparison stops there. His hair, though mostly blue, has bright gold streaks, showing his Saiya-J
in half of his genetic code escapeing and bonding with the rest.
I dont think he'll have a forth level yet, but i ask you, what do you think?
