Dragon Ball NG ISSUE ONE

[Hawki_ice]

Ok its ready i got the pages up and the comics there

Sorry it took so long i couldent get hold of him i have sorted out a system now!

http://www.fatal-anime.com/fah/freelance/

Go read it Its ausom!

 

[Naz]

I just read it, really really awesome, exceptional work!

 

[Hawki_ice]

yea its all maded by David Jones Hes an ausom artist and i carnt wait for the next Issue!

 

[Wangster]

i wanna read it!! but the page doesnt works for me!! !!

 

[Lone Wolf]

w00t! Thats cool Davids a good artist

 

[Hawki_ice]

If it dont work tell me the Problem!!!!

I can send it if i HAVE 2!

ONLY IF I HAVE 2!

 

[Wangster]

its working now! i am gonna read it now.....

 

[MEGGEDO]

MMMMAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that ownz. when does the next one come out???

 

[Gonadz]

I already know it and its realy good. This guys is realy talented in drawing.

 

[Vegito1180]

im reading

 

[preddie45]

very exceptional work.

 

[greentaco]

Nice work, I like it, but some of the drawings could be better. Not bad, I can't wait to see the next one!

 

[Emeka650]

wow it was awesome.I didnt think it was going too be so good. Drawings rocked. I cant wait for issue 2

 

[MrMasj]

The page isn´t working for me =(

 

[Hawki_ice]

OK sites fixed!!!

 

[Sicron]

HALELUJA, ITS COOL, GREAT DRAWINGS, IT RULEZZ

 

[MrMasj]

Wow that was awsome.
Keep up the nice work =)

 

[Cold Steel]

Holy cow!!!!!! That is awesome! You ever thought of publishing this!? Nah just kidding however if these drawings where improved just a little it might stand a chance. I really love the comic, it actually has the eat humor in it. Keep going man i can't wait for the next part.

 

[ImpTaimer]

This is awsome, good drawing, good speech, good comic layout, and...OH NO! Its over! FISHSTICKS!!!! Its just like a freeken dbz episode were it gets to the good part and woop, there goes the music and the narrator, the end. Looking forward to the next volumn. Good luck.

 

[Skiwan]

thanks

hey, im the guy who wrote and drew it, im working on the next issue, which should be longer, any way, if you have any suggestions for the manga/comic, go to the ESF freelance forums (http://www.fatal-anime.com/esf_forum/) , i'd be happy to think of including them....