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This isnt a Fan Fic nor a fight club thing so i dont know where to put it.
This is something i wrote, and thought id share....so here.
What are your comments on it, does it give you a point im trying to make?
By: David Perault
Picture this:
Your in the middle of a room.
A dark room.
You see a feint light on one side
And on the opposite side, a bright light
You notice that both lights are doors.
One cracked.
And one open fully.
The open door is sin.
Itâs tempting you
wanting you to choose that door.
And the cracked door is like God.
Showing you that he is there.
But you have to open the door.
If you choose the cracked door.
Then and only then are you rich.
If you choose the Fully open door.
Then you have choosen wrong.
This is something i wrote, and thought id share....so here.
What are your comments on it, does it give you a point im trying to make?
By: David Perault
Picture this:
Your in the middle of a room.
A dark room.
You see a feint light on one side
And on the opposite side, a bright light
You notice that both lights are doors.
One cracked.
And one open fully.
The open door is sin.
Itâs tempting you
wanting you to choose that door.
And the cracked door is like God.
Showing you that he is there.
But you have to open the door.
If you choose the cracked door.
Then and only then are you rich.
If you choose the Fully open door.
Then you have choosen wrong.