BTL Adult Gohan

[PiXel]

strange for me it looks like the skin is semi realistic but the eyes are cartoonish.
You have to do the muscles between the eyes and the muscles of the eyebrowns.. <_< lookn good nway.

 

[Ravendust]

I love the hair, looks spot on except for one tiny detail...In normal form you've got the hair right but in Mystic the front downward spike hangs the other way, I took some pics to show you what I mean:

Normal (spike + strand hang to the right):

Mystic (spike hangs to the left):

Yeah, like I said, minor, but that's really the only gripe I have :]

 

[Skiwan]

strange for me it looks like the skin is semi realistic but the eyes are cartoonish.
You have to do the muscles between the eyes and the muscles of the eyebrowns.. <_< lookn good nway.

okay, for a start, they arent muscles, they're folds in skin, no human has muscles right inbetween his eyebrows, they do have them above, which create furrows in the brow, but they arent shown in dbz (well they are, badly those slanted describing lines that apear above the eyebrows to describe expresion). I'll test to see what it looks like, but I dont really like those folds they look bad, they did on my goku, and im sure they will on gohan, and they arent always there in the series, only during certain emotions they are shown. Plus im only shading the parts that would be defined in the anime, i mean, the shadowing is all in acordance to how the body shape is, i dont think my style is realistic, or cartoony, i think it fits dbz, because the shading goes in all the right places according to proportion, shape and muscle structure, according to akira toriyama's style.. I try my best anyway

You're right about the slant gir, i'll sort it so its not so servere but i have to keep it to make the side view look correct

and about the bang on his head, well, in the manga in some shots its changed, in others it isnt >_> so im gonna flip it over and see what works best =]

 

[TrIdAn]

i dont know im just seeing the face a little too fat.....

 

[Lord Killmore]

looks great man but i think you should maybe change the faces on ssj2 and mystic so he looks a bit different and well angrier or something ^^

 

[Ravendust]

I did a dimensions check, it's almost perfectly in proportion, I have a few crits but again they're minor.

Pink = In proportion.
Red = Where the points are.
Blue = Where they should be moved to.

Lower jawline slightly

Lower ears

Scale head horizontally (to make it thinner)

Make the skintone lighter

Anyway, those are my crits, ignore them at your peril I tried doing a paintover but it sucked, anyway I hope you get what I mean.

 

[Enix]

I know it might be a bit more work, but the only difference from the normal and mystic is that little piece of hair, I think you should give him the orange gi for the mystic version. Thats my only crit .

 

[KidMan]

Wow dust made it look more like Gohan.... Nice improvement. David I suggest you do that when you can.

 

[Skiwan]

I know it might be a bit more work, but the only difference from the normal and mystic is that little piece of hair, I think you should give him the orange gi for the mystic version. Thats my only crit .

they wont let me

I'll fix the face a little, but not that drastically >_> because the ref you used is ugleh >_<

 

[Almighty_Gir]

but the orange gi is sexy!!!

i would fire them =/

 

[Ravendust]

I'll fix the face a little, but not that drastically >_> because the ref you used is ugleh >_<

SV said the same thing o_o, what's wrong with it

 

[Volosity]

the thing is is that you model is still in 1 position(stright up) and the eyes shouldn't move really when they move there head down a lil is when the eyes get madder just watch gohan fighting cell lol there is alot of it

PS: you need to make the SSJ and SSJ2 lighter colors for the yellow power lol

 

[Cold Steel]

Maybe you could make the ssj2 hair a little longer to create a little more difference between the ssj and ssj2 models, Right now, they seem to look-a-like a lot.

 

[Skiwan]

i'll try my best i did actually add a few more spikes, also moved the hair around, made it more evently spaced/more spaced out.

 

[TrIdAn]

ahh thats what i was talking about great job man.

 

[Super Veggeto]

here you go, these imo are some of the best drawn adult gohan face:

i think it looks great over all, ssj2 and mystic could use a little more expression to it but it's getting there =]

also >_< a blue gi gohan transforming into a orange gi gohan? as cool as it might sound it'll be weird too =/ think about...mystic isnt the orange gi...gohan could go mystic naked if he wanted to. ;D heh it's true though...

 

[Skiwan]

thanks for the refs ^_^ they're perfect, i know what you mean about expression but i kinda wanted to keel them expressionless, but i'll change it =P

I dunno, when he was mystic, thats when he had the orange gi, its kinda like... thats what everybody remembers mystic gohan as, plus, his clothes changing to that would make sense, scince kibito did just put them on him like magic, plus hopefully mystic is gonna be perm trans too

 

[Super Veggeto]

I dunno, when he was mystic, thats when he had the orange gi, its kinda like... thats what everybody remembers mystic gohan as, plus, his clothes changing to that would make sense, scince kibito did just put them on him like magic, plus hopefully mystic is gonna be perm trans too

haha ^_^ thats true i guess... we'll have to talk to the rest about it ;D

anyways great work man, cant wait to see more =D

 

[Skiwan]

Better ? time is a factor, scince im gonna redo all ssj forms from this one, i need to know how this looks before i continue

 

[Mr. Phonso]

looks good to me, just the neck thing is still there on the side >_<