No offense, but from what I can see, you took the original model...and made it...worse? Seems to me, like you took detail out of it.
Seriously, you should consider to stop 'modeling' all together. When one wants to learn an ability, be it modeling, art, whatever; you are expected to make progress. In the past couple of months/years, I have hardly seen you make any progress. Not so much in the sense that you can't model, but more in the sense that you are not motivated to learn modeling.
For countless times, you have been criticized on your edits, hell, your entire reputation relies on your edits. Yet few times have you actually took upon Google to find you some tutorials, to LEARN to make something NEW, rather than to EDIT something.
Ergo, you are not really making any progress whatsoever. Nor are your edits good enough to make people happy on these forums.