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BANG.
BY: TANK
BANGâ¦â¦..Thatâs the last thing I remember before it all ended. I was a 16 year old
Male. Straight Aâs Good in school. Respected anyone. One day I got off task and started taunting a lower 10th grader. Thought it was funny at the time. Called him stupid and retarded just because he looked funny. But that taunt Ended my life. One Week later, I think it was a Wednesday, I was walking in my homeroom. As soon as I walked BOOM! I heard the first gun shot. I thought I had been hit but I hadnât it was a 16 year old girl next to me. It was the 10th Grader from last week. I noticed everyone was against the walls all huddled in a corner.. Looking at me with a scared glare. I started getting this sick feeling in my stomach like âMy life was to short. Or I canât die.â He had the gun pointed at me. After I stopped looking at the bleeding girl I looked up and noticed he looked at me with such hatred. Then he burst out, â All I wanted in my life was friends and family to love me. Buutttt NooO! No one could love thisâ¦.this idiot, special, Retarded fool!â âWell Iâll show who all deny my abilitiesâ¦â¦.STARTING WITH YOU!â With that word I felt the whole world shake and tremble until I noticed it was I who was shaking and tremblingâ¦.. I never thought a couple of words could send a person to such insanity. âIâm Sorry for everything that I have done in the pas-âBOOM! Before I finished He pulled the trigger. Right then and there I thought I saw the bullet coming at me in slow-mo. I could see the bullet entering my flesh ripping anything away in its path. Such Pain. You knowâ¦..I think over 1 million thoughts rushed through my head between the time he pulled the trigger till the bullet hit me. Finally I hit the ground and I Remember him looking down at me and saying, âWhoâs stupid now.â The last thing I saw was the kid putting the gun up to his mouth and before he could pull the trigger I Felt a sharp pain in my body. I felt my feet go numb. Then my hands went numb. I was going into shock then before my face went numb I felt my heart stop pumping. It felt like I was drowning. Worst thing Iâve ever experienced, and the last thing ill ever experience, all thanks to 2 words I said.
LAtely ive feltl lke writing some stories so i have
BY: TANK
BANGâ¦â¦..Thatâs the last thing I remember before it all ended. I was a 16 year old
Male. Straight Aâs Good in school. Respected anyone. One day I got off task and started taunting a lower 10th grader. Thought it was funny at the time. Called him stupid and retarded just because he looked funny. But that taunt Ended my life. One Week later, I think it was a Wednesday, I was walking in my homeroom. As soon as I walked BOOM! I heard the first gun shot. I thought I had been hit but I hadnât it was a 16 year old girl next to me. It was the 10th Grader from last week. I noticed everyone was against the walls all huddled in a corner.. Looking at me with a scared glare. I started getting this sick feeling in my stomach like âMy life was to short. Or I canât die.â He had the gun pointed at me. After I stopped looking at the bleeding girl I looked up and noticed he looked at me with such hatred. Then he burst out, â All I wanted in my life was friends and family to love me. Buutttt NooO! No one could love thisâ¦.this idiot, special, Retarded fool!â âWell Iâll show who all deny my abilitiesâ¦â¦.STARTING WITH YOU!â With that word I felt the whole world shake and tremble until I noticed it was I who was shaking and tremblingâ¦.. I never thought a couple of words could send a person to such insanity. âIâm Sorry for everything that I have done in the pas-âBOOM! Before I finished He pulled the trigger. Right then and there I thought I saw the bullet coming at me in slow-mo. I could see the bullet entering my flesh ripping anything away in its path. Such Pain. You knowâ¦..I think over 1 million thoughts rushed through my head between the time he pulled the trigger till the bullet hit me. Finally I hit the ground and I Remember him looking down at me and saying, âWhoâs stupid now.â The last thing I saw was the kid putting the gun up to his mouth and before he could pull the trigger I Felt a sharp pain in my body. I felt my feet go numb. Then my hands went numb. I was going into shock then before my face went numb I felt my heart stop pumping. It felt like I was drowning. Worst thing Iâve ever experienced, and the last thing ill ever experience, all thanks to 2 words I said.
LAtely ive feltl lke writing some stories so i have