2nd crack at a wallpaper

[Hash]

Well I fired up photoshop today, and tried making a wallpaper once again. I know it sorta looks like my last one (If anyone remembers it), but i'm not used to making things so big, and I find it hard to fill up all the space.

Anyways, enough blabbering, any critz and comments are appreciated. Oh and its 1152 x 864 if anyones wondering.

 

[Soulicro]

If I was to see that every time I was to look at my wallpaper, my eyes would start bleeding and I would become blind.

And it would all be your fault.


When it comes to the effect, theyre pretty basic - You got some yellow clouds in there, one X-type brush all over the place, and some sort of wind/motion blur filter. I think you should attempt a new one, using the big stock you have with this piece, and go for a more simplistic look.

Nice try though.

 

[Judge]

I would change the background, and maybe even remove those 2 pics on the left. I don't think it adds anything to it in a good way.

 

[Guru_San]

eh wel ive found with papers that they really cant be too busy or mega bright on the eyes as think.. your lookin at it alot. and how can u see the icons? Multi coloured papers like this drive me nuts, add a hue/sat to it, keep it to the theme. and the BK is like said, just clouds inverted it seems. not bad attempt tho.

-SaN

 

[Hash]

I know, I can't stand wallpapers that are really bright and chaotic either, and while I do admit it isn't exactly dark and simple. It isn't too bad, and within a few minutes, it isn't really bothersome at all.

But when I have the time, I think ill try again. Only this time, try and make it simpler. Anyways Thanks for the critz guys.