My first model - gohan

[Ravven]

Home at least...

Hi guys! Long time no see, huh? Well I had a week of with my class on mountain trip and than I've got Republic Commando, so I was a little busy . I hope it's allowed to continue my topic after almost week break... So if it is here is my latest work. On previously i posted the beginning of hair so here's a little update, hair are gray 'couse on black you can't see shades...
Enought talking...

C & C welcome....

 

[dor]

look great man how did you start modeling?

 

[DJ-Ready]

i cant belive this is supposed to be your first model ... amazingly good for a first model
the face looks very much like adult gohan ..
hmm the hair reminds me more to a trunks then adult gohan .. dunno why lol
then again, i suck at giving crits about models >_>

 

[Hobomaster]

front view: the shape of the eyes.............. it's kinda too far out

but anywayz

excellent for a debut model

 

[Sentient]

front view: the shape of the eyes.............. it's kinda too far out

Agreed... besides the shape of the eyes, i think they are just a tad too big.. make em a bit smaller.. and streamlined.. rounder.. know what i mean? They are too blocky right now..

Besides that, great sofar.. really nice job if it's your first.. :yes:
Really like the hair too..

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

nice but yarr ears dont fit!

 

[KidMan]

Wow man. Awesome job! Can I have your babies?

*on topic* I agree with Volosity's picture. The changes he made with the red line seem very correct. Keep up the good work man. And maybe you could do an awesome Trunks Model in the future...

 

[Ravven]

About the eyes - it's just model, so I don't think it needs more rounder eyes, skin will make em rounder

Recko : What's wrong about the ears ?? I dunno how make em better

EDIT: I'll post later the hair ref I'm useing

 

[zeldalink]

yo ravven man why dont you respond on msn man ?

ontopic : looking good

 

[Ravven]

sorry zeldalink, but my msn sucks and log in, when ever it wants... Sometimes I'm logging in one hour !!!... I'm having horrible problems with it...

So here's the hair ref I use:

BTW: I have diffrent ssj1 refs than this one here, just couldn't find normal...

EDIT: Ok, finished moment ago.... front hairs, how are them??

C&C allowed

 

[KidMan]

Damn not to bad at all, my friend! Here are some pics for refference! Love the work man!

Man Gohan as a sweet ass..... lucky Videl!.... O_O

mmmmmmm Gohan.....

 

[Growler]

wrists too fat and arms are too short. Waist is too thin/ hair is too small. Wierd shadows around the shoulder area

 

[g0jack]

Hair height seems to match but his hair should be wider from the sideburns and go up widening, then go back in like the ref pics

 

[KidMan]

Oh something else I found. He hands are too fat. They need to be more muscular instead.

 

[Ravven]

My english sucks... I could use a drawover, onyone?

Well, I fixed arms and hands right after I posted that picture, so in next render you should find them much better, a little longer...

 

[movento]

i suggest you make his eyes more narow.also scale his shoulders,cause now you cant see them.can you post a side view,i might make a drawover then.

 

[Ravven]

Okay guys, here is a little special for you, my fans thanks to reckoning I managed to do cell shading render Here is it:

and normal render:

And here's the side view for movento:

How do ya like em??

Could use some drawovers guys

 

[dor]

man you have talent love your work ..
sory but its for esf ? :shocked:

 

[JDeezNutz]

Ravven, if this is your first model, its excellent! Dont think i have ever seen anyone do so good on there first try.

The wrists are a-tad bit to thick, try narrow-ing them down abit

GJ though!

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

=) nice renders

you dont have to model in sideburns, they can be easily skinned on, i can see the polyflow is quite messy there :/

anyway why you not respond to me on msn :/ if u need help with skinmapping and character rigging i'd be happy to help =)