WIP of Promotional background.

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This is a WIP i started it today, didnt finish it, but there is alot i need to do to it, but here is what i have so far. C&C, keep in mind, i have plans for this already this is a, a update of progress.
 
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in a way i like it, i just dont like the lines, wires...whatever u wanna call em 8/10
 
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Some of your lines (uptop) overlap on edges. Fix it, especially if this is for promotional purposes.
 

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Yea, those wires take it down a few notches. :x
 
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erhemm...thats what we all....ment
 
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lmao, repetition anyone? lol. Ya i noticed that the lines were a bit off, ill fix them. ANything else so far?
 
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Personally I think it's ****, but I do beleive it can be saved. Just add some color and fix those damn wires. :\
 
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I like it.. it have a prof. style... but not my style ^^


But i can crit the one thing wich i dont like at it -.-"

it the dam pc on the rightdown side-- it dont have to right matching color and the black lines are to weird...Any remove the black lines ^^ just do the computer in a other color ^^
 

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I think it is sub-par, and if I saw this, I wouldn't go to your site.
 
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urgh.. ok.
Get rid of the redness, not a good flow using the red i know it stands out so try use a better font. and y does the SS logo scream out playstation logo to me?? oO..

the contrast between the black wires and they grey shapes dont work, add some green boxes between them, show they r connected to something..

-SaN
 
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that'd be hot for an entry splash but not a layout.
 
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Its not a SIte Layout. And I am going to work on it with your guys help :).
 
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i likie it, has a nice clean look to it, nice job.
 

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