Alright, well...
/good_things:
The cloths look good.
/bad_things:
Uhm... Not so much as the skinning... But the scaling of the arms. Theyre just too thin. The skin shade of his head and body and arms doesnt match... And the actual shoulders dont work with where the arms really start, almost as if he has two sets of shoulders. Plus, the head needs to be brought up a little.
P.S. - People, it doesnt matter if his expression makes him look stoned. In a fast-paced game like ESF you barely even get a glimpse of the models face so why care that much?
/things_to_consider:
The boots. They look as if he has no feet... Too round I think?
Hey, for a first model this is really good. Not that I model but that just doesnt look like someone's first model :] just fix a couple of things and itll look fine.