Vegeta (Another one -_-)

[Darkstorn]

*zing*

PC: 2222

Still pretty far from done. Hair needs some work, so does the smoothing + legs and arms. It's my second player model ever.

HUGE pic:

Yes, the renders suck as they hide some important details(hey where's my nose?)

 

[niobe]

better make it a light color so i can see it better, dark green isn't good.
but the rest is kickass :laff:

 

[SajaN^PridE]

Awensome work dude, haven`t seen such renders, what prog do u use? GJ!

 

[PiXel]

well nice nice! but the legs r to small i think!

 

[CM]

he... umm... looks kind of like a midget. make him grow!!1!!1

 

[cr4zy.ch]

The legs are too short and his hair should be scaled down a bit, it's too tall.

~cr4zy.ch

 

[Darkstorn]

Hmm yeah... The proportions are a bit off... I was going for the Super Vegeta version first but then i decided to make the normal one. So there I'll fix it soon.

 

[Styer101]

off: he looks like one of those little army dudes :laff:

on: yea the legs are too short make them like 1/2 longer besides that awesome job

 

[imkongkong]

looks like a good start.. proportions r off thoe..

 

[CrackerJack]

Its alright, joints suck, porportions with legs.. etc..

dark"storn" hmm.. Who could this be..

 

[Darkstorn]

Yeah everything will be fixed. I just wanted to get it rendered as soon as possible. The arms were pretty much exprerimental anyway, gonna redo them completelly.

dark"storn" hmm.. Who could this be..

Uh... What do you mean?

 

[SSJ Toast]

Its alright, joints suck, porportions with legs.. etc..

dark"storn" hmm.. Who could this be..

if your thinking darkone then thats not him, this guy is usually active in the ts and cs community, and is an admin at CDG forums, and also modeled some kickass guns

 

[Suh Dude]

Yep, and im his proof too, me and him are the specialistcentral.com moderators, and i still want to skin it......

 

[dynamic`]

what exactly is that muscle suppose to be under his shoulder and next to his chest?
you do realize that that doesnt exist

 

[Darkstorn]

It's a smoothing error

/e: Not a smoothing error, but some crappy face structure.

 

[Diablos]

Here's a few crits from me ^^

1.Make the head around ... uh.. 1/6th smaller, thats the best way i can put it. Also make his hair flow backwards as well as up.
2.Move the knees down just a tad, so his shins arent bigger than his thighs.
3.Make the feet just a tad smaller
4.Looks to me like you've used a few too many polys around the chest area (which from *most* angles is predominantly flat, cut a few of those and use them to give more sides to the legs which are looking a little boxy right now.

That's about all i can see that /needs/ fixing, there are probably others but no doubt you'll sopt those yourself ^_-. Keep it up.

 

[Fire Phoenix]

dont worry. you can never have too many vegeta models to choose from. cuz hes my fave. him and gohan. but its still wip, so dont worry. so far the legs need work. and upsize everything. like sorta make everything larger by a certain degree. good work

 

[TrIdAn]

he looks kinda small.

 

[Darkside]

ya proportions are off a bit. i think you should make the legs longer, and raise the shoulders a bit. the rest is really awesome, gj

 

[Darkstorn]

Yeah i already fixed the proportions(Fixed them way before even posting the first pics). But it seems my motherboard "exploded" and it takes me another week to get a new one.