Lol...Do you realize how many edits and models have been made of this?Your model looks identical do any of them. "FAT" That is all it looks like. If you wanted to make a good USSJ model you should start from scratch. POLY by POLY. It is too hard to edit a ssj1 to ussj unless the model itself has the ability to stretch in that way. I have tryed this it is impossible to make a decent USSJ out of the original esf ssj vegeta model. Like I said it is identical so .. as far as crits, it is ok, just fix the arms where they go into his gloves, looks a little weird.