The textures are meshed well, they look flat & unproportioned.. they dont give a gritty feel and the face is really cluttered. The title also doesnt fit the way the face is because well, it's too cluttered with un-needed and spaced out effects..
I'd get rid of the button at the top of the nose and the text written on the face.. The texture layed on the face isn't really well placed.. just looks plopped on and overlayed/soft/hard lighted on.. the nose wouldnt be cut so cleanly as well..
Also get rid of that black line crossing over the eye.. brush the textures up and blend them in.
Lotsa stuff to fix and the crit is harsh but the type of art that we do, is needing it now.. effects are being overdone =/