"Unnamed" Indy Art

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Omg man, I love it! How the hell did you do that? o_O

- Just one thing bothers me, it looks a bit low quality... :scared:
 
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Oh its that cawk picture.
Looks cool to me but its a little funky o_O
 

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the bottom left looks a lil bright..but overall decent job on it. :]
 

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Exxcept the line thingy's on the sides, I don't like it at all, those wavy things in the middle I dislike, weird blending, too random
 
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it needs another layer of grid to overlap the whole thing i think.

overall though, its awesome

8/10
 
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just doesnt appeal to me, it looks a bit rushed and un thought out. it needs better blending cause i can pretty much so all the different effects u used.
 
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the image is overall c00.. but the effects are pretty .tarded... it looks like you took all the lil tutorials u ebah had and put all the results into one piccy..
 
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dudeman said:
the image is overall c00.. but the effects are pretty .tarded... it looks like you took all the lil tutorials u ebah had and put all the results into one piccy..
I don't see the scanlines j/k
I think it's a very nice indy art.
Altought the scanlines should be a little brighter.

Greetz
 
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Welll its good to get some real critz, thx alot.

(usually i just get "WOW GJ" or "BLEH, its ok")
 
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hmm.. i was kinda rude and unhelpful in my last post sooooo:

for improvement:
1. a focus point... somewhere to look at instead of special stuff all over the image, the will make it non-special

2. some more colour, it seems like u simply put a blue color layer on it

3. less different styles in it.. i see twinkles, wires, scanlines/boxes, tentacles... doesnt really fit together

4. learn using the burn and dodge tools.. they are really importaint!

i hope this helps, feel free to reply or pm me if you need further help.
 
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Well i think you took my last post as a sarcastic post, but it wasnt. Your new post dudeman is much more helpful, but the last one u did would've sufficed, but thx neways :D
 
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nah i didnt take it sarcasticly.. i just looked back at my last post and tought: "wait, this isnt like me" :p
i wrote it late in teh night so i was tired and bored..
 

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