Trunks- Drawn in class

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I bet the kids at school call you a DBZ whore. =)

I don't like the shading.. you should fix that, and what the hell is wrong in the middle of his pants? His penis is that pointy? Dang... I bet some people call that the Super Saiyan wang.

He looks consipated, like trying to take a crap while fighting frezia or what ever.

Overall, I give you 6/10 since you aren't Akira. ;)
 
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That "shading" is just to separate his normal form and Super Saiyan form. If you notice, the right side (of the picture) is his Super Saiyan form while the left side (again, the picture) is his normal form. Besides the easily noticable things, I can say it looks nice.
 
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he seems a bit stark...like his shoulders.... is he thinking about gettin head? cause he's gonna get it (by me)

all and all pretty damn nice
 
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I would have gone a lil more like this



not too bad .. just boat load of minor things
 
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Though I like the half super saiyan adaptation... I myself prefer either/or... not a bad job on it over all though.
 
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I like the idea with the splitting "normal/super saiyan"

"@Bile - Like you, I think that the shoulders are too wide."

Still, I seem to see a lack of muscles and armlength
The sword is too short.

Here's how I would make it:



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i like the drawing, but the drawover bile did gave me a feeling that said, hey, thats trunks :p i know that growlers drawing is the same one, but his facial features arnt really recognizeble <-- or however you spell that.

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sword master, if you want C&C for your pic, then start your own threath >_>
 
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Nice pic but eye is too big for body and to low, maybe move it up a little and give the fase more free space(bigger), nice shadin and good clothes. but body might be a bit small, but the rest is great!
 

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yeah yeah.. i'll remember that next time...
Besides, it's ugly and you don't have any idea about anatomy.. So don't bother posting anything looking like that again.
 
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Bolteh, that almost looked like constructive criticism, this time breaking the respect rule gets you a warning. Enjoy your last one before I escort you to the door.
 
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Bolteh said:
Besides, it's ugly and you don't have any idea about anatomy.. So don't bother posting anything looking like that again.
I still like it though. The arms and the legs are in perfekt size.
 
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SwordMaster said:
I still like it though. The arms and the legs are in perfekt size.
That's fine if you like it... make your own thread if you want C+C's... Bile did a nice drawover, but you made your own drawing. Now that you posted it... I'm gonna say that the arms and legs are definately not perfekt sizes... they don't even make sense and with arms like that he'd topple over, even with ssj abilities. It looks nothing like Trunks... You should think about using my Trunks as a drawover ^_^
 
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Growler said:
That's fine if you like it... make your own thread if you want C+C's... Bile did a nice drawover, but you made your own drawing. Now that you posted it... I'm gonna say that the arms and legs are definately not perfekt sizes... they don't even make sense and with arms like that he'd topple over, even with ssj abilities. It looks nothing like Trunks... You should think about using my Trunks as a drawover ^_^
yeah sorry. I think yours is great work, without having something to draw after
 
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It looks badass, but I have a few crits on the face. The eyes are too square and should be wider and thinner, the nose should be pointier rather than long and sloping, also the position of the mouth is strange and off-center. All-in-all, a pretty fantastic drawing for a sketch in class. Looks like you really got to know Trunks well when you modelled him.
 

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