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Starting a comic, I want people to vote if it's worth a damn or not, so I can continue if it is. Also, I need a name. So post ideas here!
 

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The text is hard to read, and its not really intruiging or funny,

A name? what about "Nionical", since the guys is "nionic man".

Try to make more, this wasn't really much,... yet. ;) and try to improve the grahpics of the characters a little, and the text.
 
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Sprite comics for the lose, you need some incrediable humour (glares at Nuklear Power) to pull it off. Also, what JP said about the text being hard to read doesn't help.

Make a few more, this comic seems like more of a story-arc introduction rather than a one-shot joke, so continue and you might strike gold.
 
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A name has already been decided. The comic is going to be a Epilogue.
"Megaman Online Comic." (The text is just fine. The characters aren't going to be improved, they are from the old Megaman games. And the comic has characters from old Megaman games.)

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New one,

 
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Fix the text. I'm getting a headache trying to read that...
 
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The text is just fine
The text merges with the background, I have to squint to read it. Make it bigger and maybe change the font, and make the colour white, that should work.
 

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