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<b>Intro:</b>
We ran like dogs.
There rifles took us to the brink of death.
We were cut down, and left to die.
<b>Verse 1:</b>
Screaming soldiers,
yelling comrades,
beaten friends,
the time has come to meet our maker.
<b>pre-chorus:</b>
Flashing rounds, with bursts of screams.
We run on through
Friends and family won't help us rally
Guns and ammo are our only allies
<b>Chrous:</b>
The smell of death is all around.
Mangled corpses, and dead men.
The power to be, the power to kill!
Mangled friends, and dead buddies
<b>Bridge:</b>
Take us to the end,
We won't be back to fight again.
For the land,
for the queen,
onwards we'll roam.
<b>Verse 2:</b>
Bullets graze,
Eyes are glazed.
Got the enemy in my sights
This will be his last night...
<b>pre-chorus:</b>
Flashing rounds, with bursts of screams.
We run on through
Friends and family won't help us rally
Guns and ammo, our only allies
<b>Chrous:</b>
The smell of death is all around.
Mangled corpses, and dead men fill the scene
The battle cries of our soldies
our mangled friends, and enemies lay lifeless
<b>Outro:</b>
We'll fight to the end
We won't be back to fight again.
For the land,
for the queen,
for my family,
onwards we will roam
will anyone hear our parting groans...?
---
Crits and comments please.
I'm not sure myself how I'd like it to sound, I'll have to sit down and write some basslines for it someday.
I'd like to be like this:
Open's up with a strong, but very melodic guitar riff. It leads on in, then the singer starts to sing. Not screaming, or moaning, but singing. Then a solo near the outro and the outro sung with great enthusiasm.
We ran like dogs.
There rifles took us to the brink of death.
We were cut down, and left to die.
<b>Verse 1:</b>
Screaming soldiers,
yelling comrades,
beaten friends,
the time has come to meet our maker.
<b>pre-chorus:</b>
Flashing rounds, with bursts of screams.
We run on through
Friends and family won't help us rally
Guns and ammo are our only allies
<b>Chrous:</b>
The smell of death is all around.
Mangled corpses, and dead men.
The power to be, the power to kill!
Mangled friends, and dead buddies
<b>Bridge:</b>
Take us to the end,
We won't be back to fight again.
For the land,
for the queen,
onwards we'll roam.
<b>Verse 2:</b>
Bullets graze,
Eyes are glazed.
Got the enemy in my sights
This will be his last night...
<b>pre-chorus:</b>
Flashing rounds, with bursts of screams.
We run on through
Friends and family won't help us rally
Guns and ammo, our only allies
<b>Chrous:</b>
The smell of death is all around.
Mangled corpses, and dead men fill the scene
The battle cries of our soldies
our mangled friends, and enemies lay lifeless
<b>Outro:</b>
We'll fight to the end
We won't be back to fight again.
For the land,
for the queen,
for my family,
onwards we will roam
will anyone hear our parting groans...?
---
Crits and comments please.
I'm not sure myself how I'd like it to sound, I'll have to sit down and write some basslines for it someday.
I'd like to be like this:
Open's up with a strong, but very melodic guitar riff. It leads on in, then the singer starts to sing. Not screaming, or moaning, but singing. Then a solo near the outro and the outro sung with great enthusiasm.