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I made this for my guitar friend Kevin lol, C&C.
- ???This is why the artwork forum is dead. No more ****ing helpful comments.
*sigh*... dude... not everything is roses and lillies, they gotta be a bit harsh so he wouldn't make the same mistake(s) again! And they DID explain why they didn't like it, they pointed out the bad things. That's good for him. I mean, ok, truth hurts. And yes, they might have as well said something positive about the sig, but it's still help if they crit as they did.I agree with Lith, you guys could say more than "it sucks"
My opinion on it is that it the lighting makes the sig look lower quality.
When I think of Spawn, it's not a huge supernova forming below him, it's dark and shadows.
The bluish color needs to be turned green. Spawn doesn't shoot too many kames. Spawn and all things Spawn tend to be dark and grungy, so you'll definately want to make that light a little less bright.
The typewriter font doesn't really match the Spawn theme, and neither does the color.
Why don't you try adding a color balance layer above it all and fiddling with the colors? Quick and easy way to change the entire look of the sig. Also, the text has a weird placement in comparison to the stock picture used. I think pulling it down to the middle and enlarging it (also some brushing and whatnot) would really help this sig.
Can I try adding a color balance layer to it?
I agree with Lith, you guys could say more than "it sucks"
My opinion on it is that it the lighting makes the sig look lower quality.
When I think of Spawn, it's not a huge supernova forming below him, it's dark and shadows.
All these comments right above, are very helpful to improve on my next one, i'll make a second version of Spawn.Spawn doesn't exactly scream Bright Blue.
I would say change the bright color to something more dark red-ish. The sig itself looks well made, but it's the bright blue that hurts it.
Last time I checked, I didn't ask for a rating or a grade. I asked for critiques, not lame ass comments.What is your definition of a "crit"? "OH I WOULD BE HONEST BUT SINCE I WANT TO BE SUPER POLITE I'LL GIVE YOU 999999/10"???
You basically said the signature sucked. You never said anything to improve it, and the text is like a watermark, it doesn't really have to blend with the signature but if I wanted to add like the "Spawn" type text, I would have put in there too. I don't like big text on here so I try to make a small visible one so it doesn't ruin it all the way.- ???
Is that because my reply was bad?
The signature isn't good in my opinion.
Okay then.
Ok this pixel right here should be red, the one next to it should be brown... gimme a break man, it's better if he gets hints of about what to do instead of following the exact requests. THAT way, his work is 100% original, unique, and most importantly, HIS!I have to completely agree with Lith.
If this section is going to shine, your reply has to be more than "this and that sucks, try something else" and more about actually explained changes, that you feel are needed.