yeah man looks better now, try one more thing
the outer glow, expand it a bit more. because the small white line i'm looking at around sakura, looks like a bad lasso-tool job
I know when I look at it closely, thats not true. but that was my first impression when I saw it. overall it looks good mate.
2nd version is a lot better than the first one, I didnt even notice the text on the first one, 2nd one is a lot more clear.