pickled covered cheeseburgers?

[SSJ Toast]

ive been asked to skinned dendza's piccolo, spent a bit on it, wip still, the pink will come soon

 

[PiXel]

looking great so far

 

[DMW]

Piccolo really isnt that muscular,but your here for skn crits not model(its not yours either so you cant do much anyway).But its coming along,keep it going and post an update(soon hopefully).

 

[Kama]

Lovin' everything except those eyes. Fix em before moving on. A characters eyes are what make them who they are.

 

[Mr. Phonso]

only the chest bugs me, mainly the middle part, dont know how to explain it but you should have less of those things ><

 

[Gama]

ya the chest and eyes so far for a wip is all i can see whats wrong wiv it

 

[Godhand]

Relax on the chestmuscles there a little cowboy ;p.
His chest looks like it's about to burst apart. Tame it down some ;p.

 

[Envee]

It looks like his sternum is about to pop out. O_O

 

[Denz]

WOOOOHOOOO DUDE O.O

I thought you droped it hehe. Im so happy atm *does teh Dendza dance*

anyway it looks so good atm (maybe becouse its the first time I see skin on my model....nah)
follow what kama said and dont forget the lines on his arms you know those black thingy's and you allready mentioned the pink ones sooooooo keep it up dude you are doing fine atm ^^

 

[zeldalink]

i dont like the chest its TO much man but i LOVE the arms and i dont know WHY i capitolised some WORDS lol

 

[Eclipse]

Amazing skin, the eyes need fixing and the pecks look a bit too mhigh (tho that might be the model ).

 

[Super Veggeto]

yeah like DS said, the middle of the pecs have weird thingys...like he a surgery there =P

 

[SSJ Toast]

hope chest looks better, any advice on how eyes should look, its hard to edit on the skin, may have to move some verts to get it to look right i guess, would have had more progress but skinmapping hands are a time consuming *****

 

[Mr. Phonso]

chest is better but i think you should only have one of those things going across

 

[Super Veggeto]

humm the chest still bothers me, ill make a drawover for the chest and eyes =]
other then those it's looking awesome!
i always liked your skinning style =D

here ya go =]
the arm drawover is for dendza, cause thats a pretty big flaw.

 

[Denz]

yeah I know what you mean SV I might fix that after he skins it (if it doesnt ruin the skin I will fix it)
here is my arm anyway so that you can see its nothing special cuz I concentrated mostly on them hands (ahh I hate those things)

and Toast I see where you are going wrong
you are trying to skin eyes from the point where that cheek thing is but heh here is a drawover on how I planed it to look like when I modeled it
hope it gives you some path on how to fix 'em

note: I drew eyes to look mean but you dont have to and I think in my drawover they are wrong from the front but heh I used that budokai ref for those when I modeled the face

 

[Super Veggeto]

ahh yeah!
really nice arms =D build very well!
good job then =] cant wait to see more Toast!!

 

[Godhand]

I made adrawover on that model referance, and presonally, I'd like the skin in a darker tone:



Looks more like a mad picollo ;p. Keep it up, looking forward to the pads on his arms.

 

[Booler]

:yes:

the dark one looks realy cool

 

[DBXMe2]

its looking great. But be carefull, making folds on purple is fun, but sometimes tuff

GL!