PFW: Seikan's Downfall

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pfw is still goin! wooo! go have a look at the updates on our site, the link should be in my sig. But what i wanted to stick in here was the background story im writing to go with the new character Seikan. It's only a short story, and ive done 2 chapters so far. Have a look Here!
Tell me wot u think either in this post, or on my forums....preferably on my forums