Perfect cell

[Marauder]

looks great man,sweet progress...
cant wait to see the face, and i just hopethe skin will come out well
good job

 

[Skiwan]

believe me, if u follow my ref there shudnt be problems apart from the tail, the feet need to be parralell to the knees though from the front, his wings should be the length i indicated in the ref cuz i made sure i got all the proportions right using the manga, which is better drawn

 

[braveheart]

Its really turning out nice but the stinger should be a little lower and about 3x bigger, and the feet look crossed but i really like it. Gj m8!

 

[guest]

sweet dark1, can w8 2 c an update good luck with the head, itll proly b hvery hard

 

[KelesK]

lookin... great! :yes:

 

[Denz]

believe me, if u follow my ref there shudnt be problems apart from the tail, the feet need to be parralell to the knees though from the front, his wings should be the length i indicated in the ref cuz i made sure i got all the proportions right using the manga, which is better drawn

Dont wory Dave I'm sure he used ur refs for everything cuz on my refs the legs
are not like that and on my ref there arent any wings or tail so dont be ""


And Darkone just send him my refs so he can see what I just said
but Dave dont give them 2 any1!!!

 

[Darkone]

No David's ref is realy good , i know David is a exelent 2d artist , man just check hes "Dragon ball NG" its awesome ... ok about something:
Fortnox , i have those elbows pad , you just dont see em in that pic because of the wings , ok now all i need is make the legs less fatter , put hes feet in outer direction (so they l face out) , make that shield a bit more accurate , make head , and maybe turn arms 45 degrees (dunno about this .. maybe ... maybe not ...)

Thx for the crytz guys , i realy apreciate it = Big thx =D

 

[Mr Smo]

far from perfect.

I'll paste what I wrote on the ZEQ 2 forums.

'
It seems you DONT know what 2 fix, is this supposed be cell or something thats kind of looks like him?

the draw over here isn't meant 2 help you, its meant 2 show you up. I don't take kindly 2 people who take other peoples animations and say that they are there own.'

 

[onobi]

his wing are much longer

 

[Darkone]

HMm the legs were like that until someone asked me to make them wider , ok i accept that crytz , now about the hands , they are like that there just in the legs , so you cant see em , i l race the arm 45 degrees so you can see em , smo i agree on some parts yes , but still prefer to use David's ref , and that "WTF?" ok i l make it smaller , but you know its suppose to be there dude...
1 thing what you mean - "I don't take kindly 2 people who take other peoples animations and say that they are there own." - if you mean that missunderstanding Ice , me had with Wolf , you dont know it lol .. just see ice will reply here and noone took anything from anyone , youl see

 

[Suh Dude]

Good job on the model darkone

 

[Mr Smo]

im gonna toot my own horn here and say:

This is perfect cell, this is what he looks like:

Dave drew him correctly, you need 2 learn how 2 follow his ref and others. You may choose 2 listen 2 people who say 'make the legs wider' but will making the legs wider be making him like cell? does cell have wide legs? no, he doesnt. Choose who you listen 2 when it come 2 crits, I'm not saying just because they don't model that they are wrong, I'm saying that you need 2 THINK about what you are going 2 listen 2. For example 'make him pink, pink is cool' or 'cells wings are shaped like that, they are shaped like spoons' which one would u choose?

Also, concerning the 'wtf?' i wrote on there, it STILL stands. Anime is about exagherating features.. but youve gone 2 far with those feet, he didnt have a giant lump coming out of the side of his feet - it was a small circle which is hardly worthy of being modelled.. hence why I skinned mine on.

 

[Darkone]

hmm , no need to throw this in here , i saw this on your portfolio already >_> , and you dont need to show me it , i have it you know..., also smo , i know how to follow refs / thank you , and i always listen to crytz , and i l listen to your crytz 2 ... big thx for them btw , yes i m tweaking cell thats why its called wip "work in progress" damm it i m not saing its finished right now , i know my self that there still alot of fixing to do ... , and btw thats not perfect either , you got the connetion on the leg (where the knee is ) all wrong for example

 

[Mr Smo]

'still prefer to use David's ref'

thats taken as 'im doing it my way, i dont need ure help - leave me alone'. Theres no need for you 2 get defensive, I'm simply telling you what you need 2 know.

btw - it's best 2 fix things up as you go, like the back for example, far 2 crunched 2gether, if you were 2 do it now you would have 2 screw around with the arms aswell. Get crits, Fix problems when they are spotted as soon as you can otherwise your time will be wasted.

edit: no my knee is not wrong its all a matter of perspective.

 

[Darkone]

'still prefer to use David's ref'

thats taken as 'im doing it my way, i dont need ure help - leave me alone'. Theres no need for you 2 get defensive, I'm simply telling you what you need 2 know.

btw - it's best 2 fix things up as you go, like the back for example, far 2 crunched 2gether, if you were 2 do it now you would have 2 screw around with the arms aswell. Get crits, Fix problems when they are spotted as soon as you can otherwise your time will be wasted.

Your right there , thats something i will fix , thx , and i dont act like " leave me alone..." if i would wanna be left alone , i would had maked this model alone and wouldnt post it on forums you know
Edit * yeah maybe you wanted to modeled the knees your way yeah , maybe i m wrong there :smile:
would be much better if we would discuse the crytz on aim ,

 

[Wolf]

-=off topic=-

DarkOne and Ice do not rip. this was a convo that got out of hand, these guys help each other with their work so they BOTH made it. they do not rip. many might have acused one or the other or both of ripping, but they do not.

-=on topic=-

looks great so far man ^_^ i hope u do good on the face

 

[Darkone]

-=off topic=-

DarkOne and Ice do not rip. this was a convo that got out of hand, these guys help each other with their work so they BOTH made it. they do not rip. many might have acused one or the other or both of ripping, but they do not.

-=on topic=-

looks great so far man ^_^ i hope u do good on the face

Thx alot m8 , and when ice post that itl be completely seatled ^_^ , ok i l continue to mak my best on the model =D

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

-=off topic=-

DarkOne and Ice do not rip. this was a convo that got out of hand, these guys help each other with their work so they BOTH made it. they do not rip. many might have acused one or the other or both of ripping, but they do not.

-=on topic=-

looks great so far man ^_^ i hope u do good on the face

Om, I cannot lie
I made those animations. If i was to say that we both made it, nuttzy would've just told the truth anywayz *he was the first i showed the animatino to besides darkone.* i've shown it to others such as mastasurf, magus, deman, ssc, cj etc. darkone wanted to get in a mod and asked if he could use my animation, i told him yes. come to find out, it was for the same mod i was trying out for which was zeq. i've kept it in secretcy, and didn't show the animations off untill months later because the models were from ftp, and i wasn't suppose to have em. but ftp is dead now so it doesn't matter. but the people here already knew what i just said, and if i was to agree with darkone, they would've just bashed me. so for those at zeq, sos, wherever the feck yall from, im no ripper alright! dont bash darkone though, i did say that he could use the animations to get in the mod, but when i shwoed it to the same mod, they called me a ripper. sorry darkeh

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forgot to go back on-topic lol. just follow what smo says, he knows what he's talking about =D. nice model so for m8. just a little off of porportions. nothing a little editing cant fix.

 

[Sadner]

You made the feet go inside like this: \ / make them like this: / \
nice model though.

 

[Darkone]

Om, I cannot lie
I made those animations. If i was to say that we both made it, nuttzy would've just told the truth anywayz *he was the first i showed the animatino to besides darkone.* i've shown it to others such as mastasurf, magus, deman, ssc, cj etc. darkone wanted to get in a mod and asked if he could use my animation, i told him yes. come to find out, it was for the same mod i was trying out for which was zeq. i've kept it in secretcy, and didn't show the animations off untill months later because the models were from ftp, and i wasn't suppose to have em. but ftp is dead now so it doesn't matter. but the people here already knew what i just said, and if i was to agree with darkone, they would've just bashed me. so for those at zeq, sos, wherever the feck yall from, im no ripper alright! dont bash darkone though, i did say that he could use the animations to get in the mod, but when i shwoed it to the same mod, they called me a ripper. sorry darkeh

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forgot to go back on-topic lol. just follow what smo says, he knows what he's talking about =D. nice model so for m8. just a little off of porportions. nothing a little editing cant fix.

Ah Thx for telling the truth m8 , yeah , how they say , horrible truth better than sweet lie ... yeah , well yeah lol damm should had made some anims my self , just didnt had time , who can make anims in a min lol , well it was agreed that you l gimme em , thx m8 and lol secrets cant last forever , lets just continue to help each other out like we always do