New try,new fly,new gif and a losted hour!

[PiXel]

well its veryshort! I know.... but it taked more then a hour!
So tell me what u think about this little ****? ^^ ;/

 

[Mortenl]

it lags... :/ u need to make it more smooth... and the background makes it very confusing so its hard to read the text... :/ but i like the explosion

 

[PiXel]

erm ok... i allready tried to make it smooth but.... i dont getted the attacks!
And i will change background! so until ill be back ill make a new one!

 

[jp]

Not bad, not bad at all!

But its a bit short, i think you should ad a real storyline.

So not like : me kill you now, but try to make a storieline, or something like that.

As for the background, use something more simple, its a bit "strange"

But good job overall :yes:

 

[PiXel]

Woot im inspirated....
look what the **** i did ^^

Nice or? I will start right now with a long fight! ^^

 

[jp]

LMAO!

I meant a storyline, not some dancingline.

 

[PiXel]

Lol..... i really dont want to do any...Dbz gif ****.... because.... U know about the black line ppl.... Wich is very popular in Japan and other states! ^^ I think that will be batter then something...dunno how to tell!

 

[MajinVegeta Tim]

i like it tho gokus text goes too quickly i dont know what he said.....