I agree the music isn't very fitting. The first part of the video is just a long slideshow.
The rest feels like you just cut the esf videos and pasted them in there. Its lacking in entertainment value.
Try some better music, and splice the videos to go along with the music. Timing is the key element to a good music video.
Much better sir, the music goes a long way toward adding dramatic effect.
This one is entertaining to watch. This is the kind of quality we like to see here.
Excellent work! ^_^ Now do another one! Practice makes perfect.