My very second model.

[Ryeko]

I took a modeling class, and I was wondering how you liked my second model, I'm still a newb at it, so if you could give me some C&C that would be very much appreciated.

 

[ShadyD]

modeling class?
They thought you this? Not a very good class than..o.o
arms have no defintion, feets are messed up, doesnt seem like anything will deform.. i recommend following the video tuts found on www.poopinmymouth.com

 

[Ryeko]

No they taught us basic modeling thecniques, this is past what they taught us. But I will do that.

[Edit] That link is broken.

 

[Super Veggeto]

Oh umm, credit on the drawing/reference would be appreciated, those refs dont grow on the trees ya know ;P


As for the model, for a 2nd I would say it's ok...
The mesh is still quite messy, unorginized and inconsistent...but umm...either way it's hard to learn that at the begining so I guess it's a matter of time untill you get used to it.

Hands dont look like hands btw, not sure what they look like...

 

[Ryeko]

The hands are laid flat, but they aren't good, I know this. Forgot about putting credits, but I'm fairly sure it was you who drew those...so thank you. xD

 

[ShadyD]

http://www.poopinmymouth.com/

 

[Ryeko]

I messed with it some more, and I was hoping somone could do a draw-over.

 

[SteelKiller]

Maybe try some smoothing groups. btw what program do you use?

 

[DannyLad]

Why no side pics btw? might help to see the overall shape etc.

 

[Jasonc]

Ur polly flow is awful. so many wasted un needed pollys.. and im no pro and can see that.. the shape is eww u should start over and try making a better polly flow model. >_<

 

[bapplebo]

Wires pls.