My first model - gohan

[movento]

sorry but i meant a side view of his body.his head is fine,no crits on that.

 

[Sentient]

Looking good.. but pay attention to the arm and waist crits..
Can't help you with the drawover.. i'm sure someone will give you one in time..

 

[Cruzharo]

Its sertainly better than my first. Great work.


To get the poly count. Go to File > Summary Info. (Darksniper uses max 5 lol)

TO weld: There are many ways to weld, some easier some harder some more handy for some stuff But here is 2:

You can either use "Editable Poly"(Vertex Sub-Object Mode) mode and use "Target Weld" under "Edit Vertices".

Or you can turn the model into an "Editable Mesh"(Vertex Sub-Object Mode) and in "Edit Geometry" use "Weld" But be sure to up the thresh-hold. (It's 0.1 on default,its just how far it goes and welds 'n such)

You'l get use to it lol...

I found both handy when modeling my car lol...

Anywayz, Great model. I can see your gonna be very great one day.

Keep it up and get that poly count, i wanna know how much it is lol.

EDIT* Err i only saw now that it has 3 pages :\ so if someone already told you somthing that i told you. Sry ...

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

Oh and with the ears, look at your refs and look at your gohan..your ears are more circulish shaped, fix and its fine =)

 

[Volosity]

make the chin a lil longer and jawline a lil more seeable

 

[Ravven]

Okay guys, a lil update:

Which face is better?? And the side view for movento How are the ears recko??

 

[KidMan]

The face on the right seems most accurate. Great job man. Please, in the future, do a Future Trunks Model!

 

[Growler]

ok...
-Nose too skinny from front
-fingers are messed up on the side view
-eyes come back too far where they meet the ears
-nose too pointy from side view
-wrists fat
-dont see any definitive neck arteries

first model... heh... ya ok.

 

[luckyownz92]

Have you thought the hands are LIKE that cause he put them in that way ?
Good model there its just nose is too pointy and eyes are a lil big thats all.

 

[movento]

there's almost nothing wrong with your model,its just great.here's my crappy drawover.

 

[RadishclocK]

well im sure thi is a awsome pwoning model ... if its rele ur first model , dont taki thi as bad , but as a DB/Z fan, can u do some corrs?.

1. Round facce ... to ... spiked chin
2. ears bigger ... to ... a LIL ... LIL smaller.

i kno u would say , i take this from .... ; but u see, the DBZ model proportion is totally incorrect , and u diference when the art director is out of vacations and a new 1 comes , so i think proportions r rele super duper kewl , and eyes and all r rele correct, but the 2 things above , is not a critic , irele say , UR FIRST MODEL? FU ... U SURE MADE 1000 BEFORE!!! is rele kewl. tnx.

 

[GokuUssj]

Nice one I hope to see his head

 

[Ravven]

Hi guys ! Sorry for not posting anything, but my comp is not working properly. I've finished the hairs and when I repair my stuff I'll post... Since then... CU

 

[[Riced]JP]

dan you sound awefully jealous. it looks great regaurdless of whether its his first model or not.

i just recently got into modeling too. best of luck.. hope it turns out how you want.

 

[Volosity]

and the nose could be a lil wider at the bottom and slightly on the top to match the bottom with

 

[zeldalink]

remember to back up before you do something you'll regret ( realy we should know listen to us =p)

 

[TrIdAn]

kind of a good model there.

 

[guest]

nice, from the front veiw he looks great! once you've done the hair he'll look perfect from there too the oinly thing is his chest, it looks wierd but i cant seem to work out why, maybe something to do with the weighted vest