MY first forum fic

[Vegeta's Briefs]

Aw...Scooterman dies :cry:, oh well, that means I'm the last gunslinger :laff:. Hey! Hsu's mother IS a hamster! Aha, nice touch. I just love my lines in this story, they are without a doubt very me...lol?

 

[Yui Sakura]

Oooooo
nice ending ^^
Good job... now its time to do another one

 

[Hsu]

;(THATS IT YOU ARE ALL SO BANNED;(

 

[Mewtwo]

Great story I loved it, it great plot and sounded very professional, Are you going to write another story anytime soon or will you be too busy with school?

 

[ScooterMan]

...I dont know.
School is all important. Unlike Veta's Briefs i am not home schooled. But i will write more eventually, and it should, i imagine be better than this.
Thanks for your comments everyone...except for glenn who i have strong suspicions didnt even read the story.