my ESF traianing video

[john_volkov]

so who do you like it ? Link remove
trainig movie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=inv6EkUU_t0

 

[Adaptus]

The link doesn't work.

 

[john_volkov]

it might take some time for the link to work

 

[PiXel]

<_< copy and paste the right link, we dont say we get an error 404 page, we get a http://www.youtube.com/index?unavail link ....

 

[Kama]

Pretty cool tut, but your grammar and spelling is so horrendous I can barely understand what you're teaching, and I know everything already. Spellcheck my good friend, spellcheck.

 

[.Guzzie.]

...I expected higher

Sound : 4/10
Spelling: 3/10
Songs: 8/10
Quality: 6/10
Friendly?:7/10

Overall 7/10

-GuZzie

 

[Kaination]

I thought it was terrible.

The spelling could really confuse a noob who doesn't know how to play, and also don't put in in-game footage of stuff you can't do properly. If you mess up the first time, re-film the part, instead of messing up 3-4 times.

Like the chain swooping, it took you about 4 tries before you got it. Next time, trim the parts off that you messed up.

And god forbid, you've been told this enough times, yet you don't listen. I know English isn't your first language, but take time to go over and look for spelling mistakes. Ask people how to spell certain things if you don't know how. http://www.dictionary.com can help you. It makes videos a lot better if you can type correctly.

1/10, sorry, but theres my 2 cents :O

 

[john_volkov]

Oki Kaination i will do an other movie about tranig and tactic's and maybe redon this one it's hard to work on a P2

 

[.Guzzie.]

Just take our adivce and make sure to check it before putting it up.It seems like in your last video you just made it and carelessly said "Ok its good"

-GuZzie

 

[john_volkov]

I'v just finish the training movie again it's much beter the the last one i hope the quality it's much beter

 

[|Overlord|]

Oh god that sound is horrible, your spelling and grammar are terrible plus ESF-World already has a guide that is much better... And plus look how long it took you to go through the chain swoop part of the vid and you weren't even chain swooping for half that time.

1/10. Your video really has all the makings for terrible.

 

[Adaptus]

I agree with what everyone here said.

Also, if I may be so honest, and I'm not trying to flame you, I'm just telling you what I think: You're making a training video, but you don't even seem to be able to chain swoop right the first time. To me, that doesn't look like you have a good idea of how the game works, and haven't mastered the different moves yet.

I like the idea of a training video, but I think you need a bit more practice yourself before you can teach other people. ^^;

 

[john_volkov]

oki guy's here it is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rSdRXTGjpzo the other movie just need's to work on you tube much beter gramar much beter evryting

 

[Adaptus]

It's better, but the text disappears too fast sometimes, so sometimes you can't read everything. Also I think you give too much info in too little time. You have to think about what it's like to people who don't know anything about this game. They don't know what anything is so you have to explain it to them, one thing at a time. You're on the right track but it still needs a lot of improvement.

 

[Zeonix]

Holy ****, man, remove that goddamn song in the beginning.

If I were you, I'd find someone to write the script or instructions for you. I had some difficulty understanding it and I like to think I'm pretty good at understanding english and at playing esf. I'd also use a different map. Rosat is the worst map esf has to offer. I'd go with cell_games_day.

For some reason, I can't go past 2:32 in the revamped version. Oh, and awesome second song.

EDITHEIL: I used IE and was able to view the rest. I was thinking you might be able to just copy and paste what's already in the esf manual. Saves you time, and makes it easy to understand. I'd also give at least 7 or 8 seconds for the longer descriptions so people can read them in their entirety without having to pause.

 

[john_volkov]

oki i can do that much easy but But i will need some more time to make it much beter hehe

 

[Zeonix]

Seriously though, get rid of that intro song.

 

[john_volkov]

hehe i like that chinese song from the jet li old movies, i will go to work right about now for the last training movie
Done http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=inv6EkUU_t0 this is it after this movie maybe i will make an other movie

 

[|Overlord|]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=UywcXmFXO0I
I can't believe you were so cheap as to rip the song from the wow internet is for pr0n clip and make a lame version of it yourself. No offence, but just about every movie you have made in relation to esf is pretty terrible.

 

[john_volkov]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=UywcXmFXO0I
I can't believe you were so cheap as to rip the song from the wow internet is for pr0n clip and make a lame version of it yourself. No offence, but just about every movie you have made in relation to esf is pretty terrible.

Nobody made a interner is for porn version of ESF if you do it do it i did not know about wow i just had that song