My drawing of a girl (totally my own for once!)

[Mystix]

the hair looks weird..

 

[Ryoko]

You can say more than that ~_~

That doesnt really help me Mystix

 

[Mystix]

well.. looks like she has a bangs on the left side of her head only.. then its one clump of hair sticking out the other side.. you know what i r meaning? spoking americon is haerd

 

[Deverz]

She still has a beard and her nose is still out of place

Otherwise good

 

[greentaco]

I like the style but I think it would look better without such a sqarish shape at the bottom of her eyes. Nice work.

 

[MrMasj]

The eyes are much better in that CellShaded picture good work =)

 

[Mystix]

i dont see a cel shaded picture.. do you mean the cg? if so, then yea, the eyes do look better, but that sure as hell isnt "cel shaded" :laff:

 

[Nicho]

Ryoko good pencil art, I noticed that the girl in the lineart looks high (eyes).. But the cg fixes that, but the mouth is freaking me out. Over all 8/10 gj! :tired:

 

[XDOG(HOADY)]

Pretty good now thats about 8 or 9 out of 10 and thks for keeping the beard i appreciate it its cool.

 

[Ryoko]

Its not a beard.. it's meant to be a piece of hair thats behind her head. It just happens to look like a beard because someone said so ~_~

 

[Akhkaru]

Ok so its a character I thought up and yes.. im not very good but at least I tried right?

Im going to cg it later, I think S-bolt is helping me ink quickly, and giving me pointers ^-^;;

Can I get some good, honest critism's and comments? I would really appreciate it as I am going to try to learn to draw. Do you thibk I have a chance? :laff:

It's a very nice piece of work. I've been drawing for a while and still suck ass, but it's all good. You've got a good start man, just keep drawing. 9/10 (Pimpeh...)

 

[Yui Sakura]

Looks really nice, like all your other work ^_^
No crits from me, it looks great

 

[Naz]

Nice drawing you got there Ryoko, it's good to see an original character from you.

Some pointers, the size of the eyes/head looks wrong when you compare it to the place of the hair.. her forhead is too small. And her head seems like a square because of that. Work a bit on the proportions and you got an excellent drawing there

grtz Naz

 

[Alteh]

Woh that looks way better but u shoulda fixed the nose first 9.5/10

 

[Xenogias]

That is really nice... Good job Ryoko