Love and cherish

[Cheeseman]

Deverz n Biscuits
Deverz n Biscuits
Lets all eat
Deverz n Biscuits

Enjoy my poem

 

[Goku_Son_1]

Anyone have anymore serious poems?

 

[Judge]

its not really respectfull to make fun of a man's work. I think coming up with a decent poem is a gift, not everybody can do it.

nicely done m8.

 

[Goku_Son_1]

~~~Ma~~~

Down in our small hut,
With our guns leaning on the wall,
We sit back an' relax,
Waiting for our pa.
Our usual days
Of rolling down the streets
In our rickety Truck
With our bare feet
Came to a terrible end
Up down near Ol' Kirby's bend.

Ma had gone hunting,
Looking for a bear
To put in the soup
That was made with care.
Her boots squished and scrunched
In the snow so deep,
And then out came the bear;
She didn't make a peep
As she snuck up behind...
When she came back, she didn't have her find.

Babbling and screaming
About an angel porcupine.
Yup, it was for sure.
She had lost her mind.
We hog-tied her down,
And went to get the doc.
But the doc was depressed,
And said that we was out of luck.
She was completely mad,
And there was no cure for what she had.

We cried all night,
Praying for Ma.
And kissed our supper goodbye,
Cuz there was none a'tall
We woke up the next morning
And found ma was gone.
She stripped off her clothes
And darted across the lawn.
We found one sock near Kirby's bend,
And then other had met a watery end.

She went back to
The place where she met,
Her dumb porcupine,
And his bear pet.
From then on in
Our sanity remained,
But our guns are still loaded,
To blow out porcupine brains.
Porcupine soup sounds kinda nice.
On the side, we'll served...bear rice
------- V.B.

Okay, I don't know what has gotten into her...:]

 

[Sk8d0g]

ok, just wanted to put something in this, not a poem
i feel bad for not reading all the poems in this thread, im sure they are all good for what they are. i noticed a couple instances where people said 'not-real' words. remember, the english language is not something carved in stone by some divine something/someone. the english language was made up and is still made up, by who, it doesnt matter. thats like saying 'this is a song, but its not a song cuz i made it' any person can make up a word just like any person can write a song, or a poem for that matter. a dictionary is only a compilation of words and their meanings and if u havnt noticed, is updated very often. and with that said i would like to point one more thing out:
the hidden names r: koblano, ryoko, and cucumba =Þ nice acronyms

 

[Goku_Son_1]

I know. Vee is quite a doctor suess (like the word Grossarity?) when it comes to poetry. Or she uses words like noob to refer to something specific (like if someone calls her a "pino mino", even though it isn't a real word [or insult] she'll use it to get her point across). BTW, just in case you meant this word too, Yahweh is African for "God".

I have a poem!!!

It's Haiku!!

The bird flies by silently
And makes room for the trees blossom


Good job in finding the names

I did the first one here, and V.B. did the next using real but rare and odd words and metaphores.

Doggies eat biscuits
Eggs and bacon
Veggies are optional
Except for when they're sick.
Rabid dogs need to be taken to
Zanzibar.
-- Me! (and Vee, actually.)

Under the bush
Silent as wind
Engulfed in flames
Lovely and trim.
Every winter
Something happens
Something takes away its flame.
Remember the fire
Embelmed in the flower
Sometimes so beautiful
Promulgation is needed fast
Only once does the flower bloom.
Never again will we see it
So nonplus am I, that just
Encomium I send to the flower.
--V.B. (and me, actually )