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Hey everyone. I started writing what will eventually become my first and only fantasy novel a few months ago. It started as an exercise, but I kind of liked where it was going so I kept at it. This is the first 30 pages or so...there is much more, with some great fighting, I'll be adding it on Friday afternoon (the files are stuck in work for pages 30+). For now, you guys can read this chunk. I'd like to know what you all think. It's mostly freewritten, so I don't expect anyone to think it's godlike. Just tell me what you like, what you don't like, what sucks and what doesn't, and most importantly, tell what you want to know about next.
Just looking for comments and criticisms. It's in PDF format so any Adobe Acrobat reader 6.0 should do it.
Here's the link:
http://home.comcast.net/~rockerforcexv/hostedfiles/sentenced.pdf
Watch this post and thread for updates.
Just looking for comments and criticisms. It's in PDF format so any Adobe Acrobat reader 6.0 should do it.
Here's the link:
http://home.comcast.net/~rockerforcexv/hostedfiles/sentenced.pdf
Watch this post and thread for updates.