Gotenks is the bomb

[The_Real_Legend]

Now that I moreorless finished my gogeta thingy
I've started a gotenks thingy
Here is the first draw:

Hope you like it.
The hair could be changed cuz I'm not totally satisfied with it.
Oh and my scanner sucks I know. (got all sorts of problems with it)

 

[The_Real_Legend]

c'mon people I need some critz and the hair and such
so I can continue drawing.

 

[Wangster]

wow, looks verry nice, i like it, only the leggs look verry odd, dunno why jet,, i think they are a lil to small.
the hair looks nice, but "un taken care off" like he never cams his hair, i think it would be cooler when he has the original haircut.

what tuts did you used?

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

He looks old in that pic or is he supposed to be older. And the hair doesn't look right. Other than that the pic is nice.

 

[The_Real_Legend]

You see the thing is Gotens aswell as trunks hair have changed
when they grew up(BTW I will probably draw them in the bg doing the fusion,good idea?) so gotenks should probably also have different hair don't you think.
Oh and I mention my tuts recently in one of my posts.

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Ow so hes supposed to be older. Then the only think that doesn't look totally right is the hair

 

[The_Real_Legend]

update

I changed the hair

It's just an idea it can be changed.
Does anyone else have any ideas?
Please speak your mind

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

No that doesn't fit try making it like chibi ssj trunks hair(just an idea it could maby look really messed)

 

[The_Real_Legend]

ok I'm scanning sometin new in right now
Edit: here it is

I'm still not there aren't I.

 

[Wangster]

you surly arnt hmm, give him the aged gotens hair, with the sides colord? or the midd collord?

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Make the middle piece thesame length as the sides ( :laff: he looks like elvis now :laff: )

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Ok I hope I'm not overloading you guys with this but here's an other try

A bit brollyish isn't he

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Try making the black hair go back then it'll be perfect (I think)

 

[The_Real_Legend]

hmm yeah maybe I'll try that
Edit: This would be the normal gotenks hair version
Though his hair should lean back a bit more I think.

Hmmm maybe I'll hold a poll and you can choose wich one is best

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Ok this the last one for now

Now ima go make a poll but do I have to create a new thread for that.
Cuz I don't see any other way.

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

The normal gotenks hair version looks the best to me. The bottum one looks like a cow liked the sides of his head lol

 

[Wangster]

are you going to cg it?

 

[The_Real_Legend]

yeah sure but first I gotta draw some good hair and also a background of goten and trunks doing the fusion.

 

[Taki]

4th one i guess. But look bro, the folds and creases are wrong, you might wanna learn more and study a bit more at www.howtodrawmanga.com im not trying to be mean or saying you suck i can do better then you just saying it looks kinda okward. Hes too buff also

 

[The_Real_Legend]

hey I would like to see some work of yours if your even better then me,lol
but how can you say he's to buffed? Have you ever seen adult Gotenks before?
Also confer Gogeta. But yeah I should probably redo those folds a bit. But hey it's just a sketch.