Fusion sketch

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This is a sketch of what i might put in the background of the gotenks I drew earlier. Any critz?
 
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looks prettty nice, emm trunks could use some work...he doesnt look like trunks at all
 
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ok listen
1 trunks his hair needs to hang torward the ground like | not to his torso like\
2 for fusion they have to be the same hight so the ground needs to be even like _________ not--------------__________
 
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little update

I changed trunks' head and inked,scanned and coloured the pic
so what do guys think of it??
 
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well how about the eyes...on the left guy ? :scared:
1 they arent in the good size...
2 they are full white ..and the eyes of trunks arent

only giving comments dont wanna put youre art down
Greet Niracle
 
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euhm don't really get where you're going at.
I know goten's eyes are a bit of proportion but the full-white stuff i don't understand.
 
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ill make a drawover but i z need to get some sleep batty boy's :fight: "after that i wil
 
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goten his eyes are white..get it...there are no round things in it :shocked:
like this -> :shocked:

you get it now ? :smile:
greetz Niracle
 
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There are pupils in his eyes its just that the are small and in the corners.
 
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Not to soon sadly cuz tomorrow I gonna bring my computer in cuz i have a damn virus I can't shake. So it depends on how fast the guy is going to be ready.
 
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sry bro, but...
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euhm ok for some you got a point:
- anarexic: bah don't quite agree
-5 elbows: euhm those others should be muscle definitions but I think I drew one more then necessary. So you got a point there.
-folds: it supposed to be a very losy pants in a thin fabric but I also aggree that it doesn't quite look right. So I'll try to fix that a bit.
 
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Yea, thanks for not flaming me :D i thought you would but anyway

When i said anarexic(sp?) uh i mean the muscles are huge..then automaticly deformed
or..small..it could be my eyes, or the hair is blocking it..but meh :D great job

I guess i kinda went to far :p
 
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Hey man don't sweat it.
I'm already gratefull that you bothered to look at it thoroughly.
So thanx for the crits.
 
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the thing with the fingers is that goten is pointing with his pinky
 
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Hazzard said:
the thing with the fingers is that goten is pointing with his pinky
Yo man, thats not a pinky. Thats your index finger, whats wrong is I think the thumb is too long
 
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Taki said:
Yo man, thats not a pinky. Thats your index finger, whats wrong is I think the thumb is too long
no he ment that his tumb (the right hand of goten) is misplaces it is on the other side of the hand where it is suposed to be
 

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