First model

[Snow_storm]

Hi all, just thought i would post my first model, i followed a tut on 3dtotal, and i think my model is coming along good.

http://img66.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img66&image=eardetail.jpg

http://img66.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img66&image=facedetail.jpg

http://img66.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img66&image=side8.jpg

Could you tell me what you think? my brother (sephiroth_nightmare) help me out with things i didnt understand (like were tools are etc) he also told me to come here and post my work .

 

[D2]

Wel for your 1st model it's pretty good better than mine 1st models were

 

[Mario Ana]

give her a neck. and if u need help with highpoly modeling you should better go here: www.threedy.com

 

[Snow_storm]

thanks for the link i will check it out now.

I quickly placed the head onto the body to show every one what i have done so far, i am still working on the body to make it better, and yea i will give her a neck

@D2 thanks, am glad you like it

Updates when i finish the armor.

 

[Synth]

The face has a wierd split down the middle, I dunno if that was on purpose though.

Also, her waist area looks wierd, like it doesn't flow with actual human characterists.

Then, I'd stretch her out a little, you can tell she is too tight, just by looking at her breasts, they almost overlap each other.

Lastly, like Mario Ana said, give her a neck.

 

[Snow_storm]

Thanks for the information, i will take a look and fix on what you have said .

Dont worry about the face, i havent welded it together yet, so there are overlapping faces etc. The body is the same atm, I havent welded it yet but i will do that tomorrow.

I will fix up on what you have said, and show an update.
Thanks

 

[Mystic Dragon]

Can you post some flat shaded pictures?