Cell Revisited

[D2]

As some of you know I am rebuilding my old Dbz model, cleaning them, rebuild where needed and quadifying them completly.

I know, I know "hey werent you working on Goku?" yes and don't worry ill get back to him too once I am completly finished with Cell.

And sorry for letting you guys miss out on most of the construction phase but I was posting that on zeq2lite forum.

Anyway
here is a wired version.

and here is a quick pose I threw on him. (so shoulder deformation aint optimal yet)

side note, im still tweakin the mesh here and there and texture is not a complete final (some of his green spots need to be changed and some added)

but constructive comments are always welcome.

 

[MrPlow]

Looks HAWT!!

 

[MugenRX]

Look good but i think it's lake more green coloor. More dark green, but it's good models.

 

[DaFeLa]

isnt this for zeq2 lite as addon?

 

[Damaera]

I agree with Mugen now that I think of it. I suggest making the skin use a darker tone of green. Also I still think the eyes need to be smaller! Other than that, looking great

 

[Denz]

Provide some side and front shots if you want some hd critics, from what i see:

- head is big
- feet also (scale them vertically)
- you need to fix the eye shape a little, look for some refs
- wings are probably short
- buff them arms
- buff the chest from the side view and widen it a little (including the shoulders (this might fix the head being too big))

hope that this helps

 

[God Gundam]

Denz covered most of the changes you need to make, and I agree id like to see some front and side shots. One major thing you need to look at however is your topology, its all over the place here, for a low poly model you can get away with triangles here and there. I tried doing pure quads at one point, everything just looked sloppy, and its really difficult to keep the shape right making a model pure quads. for example, on your cells head, you have his horns going up, you merged a row on the border to make it a quad, which just makes your topology look awkward, it also from what it looks like kills the shape from certain angles by pulling it inward there.

 

[D2]

fixed a few things
*color correction
*feet
*size head and neck
*nose
*tiny body adjusts

*Edit

Views

 

[D2]

new head, new texture

 

[God Gundam]

Posed Renders are nice and all, but they can be quite difficult to crit accurately. The proportions get skewed cause of the angle etc.., next time just post front/side pics for us again. For your wire render your hands are Wayyy too thin for any humanoid creature on the side view, looks like he had it compressed in a vice or something. It also makes it look like he has 2 fingers, this cell form most definately has 5 fingers per hand. Your new head looks better, but id have to see wires and a decent front view to give you better crits on it. The "horns" look a bit tall to me.

Post another set of front/side pics and ill get back to you with more crits, also like to see if you cleaned your topology up a bit at all if not i can do a drawover later when you get me those front/side pics. also, when you take wire pics, do it over a skinless grey model, cant see part of the wires at all with his black skinned body parts =/

 

[Denz]

a lot better but..

here's a fair shot of him you should aim for

notice that his upper body is buffed a lot making the character strong and tough

critics atm:
- your neck is too long, shorten it
- grab the whole head (without those horn things) and stretch it this way <> from the front a little (atm he reminds me of evil fox somehow with the eyes and all)
- thighs are too fat in that center row, try to make it more cylindrical (look at the first pic)
- scale the damn upper body lol (ref)
- scale that chest plate in the center in this direction also <>
- dont be afraid to **** it up, you'll fix it
- please post textureless fronts and sides as GG said

more refs

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_Gpdj3N-gj...5_LFoU1I/s1600-h/dragon_ball_Prefect_cell.jpg
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Gpdj3N-gj...AAG8/F_wY1Nq_t-8/s1600-h/dragon_ball_cell.jpg
http://media.teamxbox.com/games/ss/2279/1248321028.jpg
http://saladotempo.files.wordpress.com/2009/09/cell-kamehameha.jpg

^ notice the jaw line from different angles, its pretty sharp angles

 

[nhoxsock159147]

ssj5 up how I knew who to go

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I only know a little play!

 

[DaFeLa]

d2 is offizialy now a developer in zeq2 lite this cell is for zeq2 ^^