Broly wip

[Iyce Da Kidd]

um dan made gogeta like 2 months after smo did.

Dan was making a brolly for evf but he postponed it for some reason. This was when smo was doing his cell.

i admit dan is copying smo in ways but im not going to start no flame wars on anything

Onto the model:

1.) Bangs... they dont look like dbz bangs.. they just fall and curve.. they should be more like a half-circle kinda thing

thats all i see right now.. what i wanted to say ppl have already said it

btw dont mess up on the legs.. thats where ppl tend to miss up because they have to fit it inside the robe.

smo did legs good... nuttzy did legs good... can u?

to be continued...

 

[Bolteh2]

EVERYONE CLAM DOWN!!
Relax, take a load off.

dont spam
dont act like a mod

and sry, didnt notice that it was ur cell nuttzy :O the skin prolly made it look ehm, bad

 

[CrackerJack]

models pretty sucky, looks absolutly nothing like brolly.

The hair looks ok from the front I guess, but your faces suck, you give em a pointy chin and a droopy nose. Hes WAY to thin.. and scrawny, hes not even muscular.

You have about 1000 wasted polys that can be cut down

And just like always, you can never make a post without spelling at least 10 words incorrect, making your grammer sound like ****.

 

[.DaN.]

models pretty sucky, looks absolutly nothing like brolly.

The hair looks ok from the front I guess, but your faces suck, you give em a pointy chin and a droopy nose. Hes WAY to thin.. and scrawny, hes not even muscular.

You have about 1000 wasted polys that can be cut down

And just like always, you can never make a post without spelling at least 10 words incorrect, making your grammer sound like ****.

Theres no reason to tell me that man , and "that suck this cuks" enought if this continues i m requesting a tread closed

And sbolt quit showing up as the best

 

[CrackerJack]

wtf is cuks, and treads?

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

typos... anywayz dan dont worry

and cj i think ure being a little harsh dont you think

 

[CM]

a closed thread? thank god! lets all spam, my brother got a seizure from looking at the pic of that brolly!

chest too high up, ribcage too far down, abs too far down, all of the muscles except the biceps on the arm are anatomically wrong. wasted polies (especially on bracelets), giant head. bad connection of hair. and thats from 2 quick looks.

 

[guest]

lets all be freinds and save this thread a lot of spam, or S--Bolt will probbably close it

 

[Cold Steel]

Goooo Chris!! I'd say if that thing will have 3000 polies when it's finished, then don't even bother. Only 10 of 9000 people will be able to play with it..

 

[Nuttzy]

well ultra you did request to post stuff that could help you, though he was blunt with it he did speak the truth,

the crits on the head and scrawniness were constructive, the fact that you have alot of wasted polys is evident,


he did have some harsh comments in there but there were crits as well, which you asked for, so dont be pissed at him for telling you what needs to be worked on, you asked the communuty for help and he tried

 

[Bolteh2]

since ur obviously not taking the crits that ppl mention in here (omg they flame you, and hate the model, run !!!!)

heres a pic


anyway, good luck on the model, cuz im 90% possitive that ull fail when ur skinning it

 

[.DaN.]

Yeah i did ask for help some people posted real crytz in here but some useles spamm , and
oo well this tread is full of spam already ,

I M REQUESTING THIS TREAD CLOSED

when i l make good updates i l make another tread ,

and if you dont have anything good to post like drawovers realy usefull crytz and solutions , DONT POST ANYTHING AT ALL!

And SSchriz , half oh that **** you wrote is wrong(hair . et.et )

Edit:

thx alot sbolt first pep that posted something helpfull , whyle the other posted crap
I l fix all that thx alot , close this tread for me i l open new one with great progress and , i asure you i wont fail !

 

[grOOvy]

I M REQUESTING THIS TREAD CLOSED

Closed on request from thread originator.

 

[grOOvy]

I M REQUESTING THIS TREAD CLOSED

Closed on request from thread originator.