Black Swordsman

[Almighty_Gir]

obviously wip...

 

[Grampz]

sexy beyond reach of children...only thing is...his knee hinges are a bit low

 

[The_Forgotten]

The knees look like they'll deform quite well ^^

Good job Gir :yes:

And by the way...

How maneh poliez bish ;/

 

[Almighty_Gir]

lotz

naw, tis arround 3k and im aiming for 5 so it is going good ^_^

 

[Emhilradim]

Suddenly I have a compulsion to hum the song to Shaft...

Very cool, but the cape's not smooth enough... Unless the cape is meant to be made of metal... Then it's fine

Happy now Gir?

 

[Almighty_Gir]

:O please dont spam here... thats what the off topic forum is for. so please edit your post to something thats constructive or useful to the model

 

[D2]

Nice model looks really good no comments here.

 

[Showster]

while the flow and construction looks clean, I think there are some problems with proportions and angles. The legs look bent from the knees down

Unfortunately I can't attach the little draw over I did, but your dude seems to be 9 1/4 heads tall which is quite alot. Normally I'd go for 8 3/4 tall for a buffed / male depends on preference but does count in proportions to.

I know its WIP but I think the chest area needs some love in polygons especially since the rest of the model seems quite heavy, it looks quite bare in comparison.

Very nice indeed hope some of the above was useful!

Did you ever finish your gutz creation btw?

Yours

Showster

 

[Almighty_Gir]

yes i finnished guts. this is another version of him. the proportions ave very correct for the character. but i see what you mean about the legs bending. ill fix that later. also. what point is there in adding more polies to the chest when its undetailed? he just wears flat armour :O

 

[Kreshi]

The model is looking awesome.
Especially the polyflow.
I don´t know this character, but if he just wears a flat armor than the use of polys is OK.
The only thing I don´t like that much are the arms...
They are looking a little bit weird...
-->The area around the biceps don´t have a so nice polyflow
-->His right forearm is much more muscular than his left forearm

And will you also make any weapons?

 

[movento]

even though i never watched Berserk i love ur model,is it for a mod?maybe his legs seem a little small for such big arms and chest.also his ass seems a little fat.don't poke me with the n00bz0r stick if i'm wrong o_o

 

[Almighty_Gir]

The model is looking awesome.
Especially the polyflow.
I don´t know this character, but if he just wears a flat armor than the use of polys is OK.
The only thing I don´t like that much are the arms...
They are looking a little bit weird...
-->The area around the biceps don´t have a so nice polyflow
-->His right forearm is much more muscular than his left forearm

And will you also make any weapons?

yeh he has a BIG ol' sword... i think the arm problem comes from the shoulder. but it animates good, and thats what i was worried about. also, about the left for-arm, its meant to be like that.
read below to find out why:

During an attack on hte band of the hawks by the god hand, a deamon cult, orchastrated by their own leader griffith. guts, caska, and the other hawk members were offered as a sacrifice to grant griffith his "kingship". during this fight, guts is the only hawk member to survive long enough to see griffith rape caska, whilst being pinned down by a deamon who has bitten his arm, he tries to free himself, and in the end, resorts to cutting his forarm off to try to save her. the last thing he see's with his right eye is her being raped, as it is taken in this fight. he never forgets. and now, uses a fake left arm, forged by a friend.

 

[MajinDruu]

Gripping story...
However...
He stands like a woman that needs to go to the bathroom real bad :O
Yeah , his stance is a lil weird , I think his knee's need to be turned outward slightly to balance that but I wouldn't know...

 

[Almighty_Gir]

we already said theres something wrong with the knees and that im fixing it

 

[Almighty_Gir]

bumpety bump, with an update..... please dont eat me...

I approve this double post for an update, so get off his ass! ~Magus

 

[Super Veggeto]

me loves the new arms =O!!!
great job on them as i said before ^_^
and i love the skin too! who ever made it =p

oh and...is the hair supposed to stay like this?

 

[Almighty_Gir]

no the hair will be alphamapped planes

 

[TeKNiK]

and i love the skin too! who ever made it =p

That would be me.

 

[dynamic`]

the knees are too low of the legs (sorry for the late model crit)

 

[Almighty_Gir]

actually, according to my referance its correct, apparently knee bracers are sligltly low on the leg to allow for better movement (weird )