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well heres my latest, with a little different twist i did a little lighting in photoshop, nothing major just a simple lighting effect to make it look like its under a lamp.
critz please (go to bottom i posted original)
 
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Very nice penciling, so why ruin it with cheap PS tricks and bad typography? Don't do anything that would distract the eye from the work, especially when it's strong enough on its own.
 
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Well, nice drawing, i guess it would be much better if you remove the font and add just a lil' more shade on the left side off the face...
BTW, can i see your ref pic?
 
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nice drawing, came out very well
something bout the eye's looks wierd...i think the right one is abit to much to the left..
 
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ill post the original and reference sometime this week
 
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Ya good drawing but the light effect is lame...it ruins it.
 
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Very nicelly done Stiff I really like this one. And I really like angelina :D
 
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heres the original

well heres the original, hows it look?
 
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Looks very close to her, but I think the lips are thicker....haha....naw it's fine and nice job btw

8/10
 
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Now that I notice it, the eye does look a little weird(the right eye from our VIew)
 
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thats so good its beyond all my comprehension of pencils and papers lol look at that hair, it's so god damn awesome
 
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Seriously man, what is so terrible about a simple url tag in the lower left hand corner? The giant text is just too much, it distracts from the piece. It doesn't need to be italic either. Why interrupt something you've put that much work into with a plug for your website? If people are interested in the work they will go through the minimal effort required to find your address on the page if it's hidden in plain sight in 8 point type at the bottom of the page.
 
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hmmm, good but not perfect, here's my crits:

her nose is a little too small, the nostrils are a little too emphasised, her right eye has a problem on the left, its curved inwards too much (i think) maybe the eyes are a little too big, you should be able to fit another eye inbetween the real eyes, and i dont think you can here.....

thats all for now, looks nice though, keep it up ;)
 
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MrDomino said:
Seriously man, what is so terrible about a simple url tag in the lower left hand corner? The giant text is just too much, it distracts from the piece. It doesn't need to be italic either. Why interrupt something you've put that much work into with a plug for your website? If people are interested in the work they will go through the minimal effort required to find your address on the page if it's hidden in plain sight in 8 point type at the bottom of the page.
Well I'm just taking a shot in the dark here but im guessing that he does that so nobody will steal it/rip it. But if thats not the reason then it does just make it look worse...
 
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Looks like she's got a fatlip coz of a punch! o_O :p

Apart from the thick lips and her left eye, thats one great drawing. :)
 
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hey!

MrDomino said:
Seriously man, what is so terrible about a simple url tag in the lower left hand corner? The giant text is just too much, it distracts from the piece. It doesn't need to be italic either. Why interrupt something you've put that much work into with a plug for your website? If people are interested in the work they will go through the minimal effort required to find your address on the page if it's hidden in plain sight in 8 point type at the bottom of the page.
make me some buttons please!
 
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yeah

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Well I'm just taking a shot in the dark here but im guessing that he does that so nobody will steal it/rip it. But if thats not the reason then it does just make it look worse...
your first guesss is correct man!
 
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Just to clarify how little protection that is, this was done in fifteen minutes:



If I was a theiving weasel that felt like putting effort into it I could very easily hide my tracks better than that. Theft is an unfortunate reality of the digital medium, you'll have to square with that some day. You have the original drawing, and that's all that's necessary to prove you did the work. All you can do if you find someone who has stolen your work is kick them in the balls and stick their head on a pike as a warning to the others.
 
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well if that dosnt work what do you suggest i cant afford a copyright!

MrDomino said:
Just to clarify how little protection that is, this was done in fifteen minutes:



If I was a theiving weasel that felt like putting effort into it I could very easily hide my tracks better than that. Theft is an unfortunate reality of the digital medium, you'll have to square with that some day. You have the original drawing, and that's all that's necessary to prove you did the work. All you can do if you find someone who has stolen your work is kick them in the balls and stick their head on a pike as a warning to the others.
 

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